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A reminder of a friend

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Crash&Burn
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0 posted 04-28-2001 01:18 AM       View Profile for Crash&Burn   Email Crash&Burn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Crash&Burn

This poem I'm going to show to you guys is something I wrote not long ago, and it reminds me of a dear friend of mine who's going away to college. I'll miss him alot, and throughout all our times together I never got tired of his goofy ways and I come to realize in things we think alike, thanks for always being there. Dopes this one is for you. Will writing this poem I actually visualized you performing the actions described in the poem and I really enjoyed writing it, I hope you all enjoy reading it...


Spare Change:

Jingling at the bottom of my pocket
I hear the sound of bumping trickets
still these trickets are not trickets at all
they are quarters, dimes, and nickels
that I hear call.
I find myself amused
by the beat of these,
I shake my booty as a treat
yet I find the sound soon at end.
My eye catches a soda machine,
and a COKE I must get.


I see the darkness coming all is bleak...

© Copyright 2001 Crash&Burn - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 04-28-2001 01:45 AM       View Profile for anonymous albert ?   Email anonymous albert ?   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for anonymous albert ?

hehe...
i liked it crash..graet job
and u cant say anything bout dopey and his coke
nice tribute.. bet u dopey likes it..
anyways..cya and keep writing

ps..wheres my tribute my friend
..hehe jus kiddin ..
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no really tho where is it!

death is not the greatest loss in life. the greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live. -norman cousins

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2 posted 04-28-2001 04:31 AM       View Profile for Allan Riverwood   Email Allan Riverwood   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Allan Riverwood

haha... Albert, relax bro.  

C&B, cute poem.  I'm sure he'll love it to bits.  Yeah, Javier and his coke... where would he be without it?     It must sound bad to say "my friend is a COKE addict."  But hey, that's our Javier.  
~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day.  Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.  
~Unknown

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3 posted 04-28-2001 03:48 PM       View Profile for Crash&Burn   Email Crash&Burn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Crash&Burn

well and I thought more people were going to see this....but thanx to those who read...

I see the darkness coming all is bleak...

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4 posted 04-28-2001 05:07 PM       View Profile for Ina   Email Ina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ina

This was very kool. Very funny and nice tribute to Javier.  Its nice to see your posts again.

REgina

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To say these words to you"bon jovi

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5 posted 04-28-2001 06:27 PM       View Profile for anonymous albert ?   Email anonymous albert ?   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for anonymous albert ?

so in a thank u way..
what bout a tribute poem 2 "anonymous albert ?"
yea...YEA!!


...?

death is not the greatest loss in life. the greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live. -norman cousins


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6 posted 04-28-2001 07:06 PM       View Profile for Crash&Burn   Email Crash&Burn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Crash&Burn

No no more tributes lol
Javier got this as a freebie cause I dunno I realized after I wrote it that the poem itself reminded him to me

I see the darkness coming all is bleak...

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jus kiddin man..
i was jus playin around...
it koo



...?

death is not the greatest loss in life. the greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live. -norman cousins

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8 posted 04-28-2001 11:37 PM       View Profile for sweetstuff101   Email sweetstuff101   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit sweetstuff101's Home Page   View IP for sweetstuff101

that was good....really good hehe! Aren't friends the best??? Keep up the awesome work, k???

Luv Always,  
  ~*~SweetStuff~*~

SuMdAy U'll CrY 4 mE bUt I wOn'T cRy 4 U, sUmDaY U'll MiSs Me LiKe I MiSsD U, SuMdAy Ull nEeD mE LiKe I nEeDed U, sUmDaY U'll lUv Me BuT I wOn'T LuV U

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9 posted 04-29-2001 05:46 PM       View Profile for Dopey Dope   Email Dopey Dope   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dopey Dope

Jorge, this sucked! I hated it!
Haha no i'm playin!
I liked it. You showed it to me in school and I gave you that kiss, remember? On the lips! hahaha......
ok no.

but anyway......yer a sweetie.....and NO PEOPLE! I don't shake my booty to the spare change in my pocket!
AND YES! I do love coke! And I am a coke addict......don't forget Gloe and Crazk!
haha ok bye!

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10 posted 04-29-2001 05:56 PM       View Profile for Child of the Stars   Email Child of the Stars   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Child of the Stars

Hehe, this was very cute.   Javi rawks doesn't he? Heh, well smilez!
  ~Carly

"Your joy is your sorrow unmasked.  And the self-same well from which your laughter rises was often-times filled with your tears."   ~Kahil Gibran

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11 posted 04-29-2001 05:59 PM       View Profile for Lakewalker   Email Lakewalker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lakewalker

Good job on the poem, it's a nice tribute

"Be kind for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle" Plato.

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12 posted 04-30-2001 12:03 AM       View Profile for Crash&Burn   Email Crash&Burn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Crash&Burn

lol no Javier does not rock in fact I don't even know y I talk to him sometimes he can be annoying MEAN and even REAK! hahaha
and god no I'm tired of this being called a tribute its like putting dope on a pedestal and worshiping him, no Javier I'm sorry your not a god or anything so don't even try to reply with some smart spiffy comment, anyways this is just a lil something that reminds me off him thats it I added the whole other I'll miss you #$%^& afterwards cause he is leaving and all that lol,
well that was it carry on ppl....

I see the darkness coming all is bleak...

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Isn't he sweet?  
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I think you mean Pepsi

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee."  W.S.

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