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fozzyozzy
Member

since 2001-03-15

Posts 336
Lessburg Virginia

0 posted 2001-04-27 10:47 PM

Dreams of Flower

At ubiquitous
A tender Blossom
Is your presence
Yielding slightly
For a kiss from
Golden black lovers

If I could be
Such a creature
Your warm petal embrace
I shall never leave
For circles of time
We remain together
Always holding
Together

Perpetual knoll
hills to scrape
A damasque sky
Dances of a cloud
Force eyes reappear
Rememberance of a violet
Juxtapositioned 'gainst
The fairest weed and
Earth, with her devotion
Breathes them both full
Of life

"The heart can think of no devotion
Greater than being shore to ocean
Holding the curve of one position
Counting an endless repetition"
Robert Fr

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

1 posted 2001-04-28 04:21 AM

Oh wonderful! Great imagery, and a good ending too!

I like this one very much Ozz.
~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.
~Unknown

Elvenblood
Member

since 2001-02-17

Posts 409
Maine, USA

2 posted 2001-04-28 09:25 AM

Very cool :-) I think this is one of your better works actually! Like Allan said, wonderful imagery. Good luck in all endeavors!

No angels in heaven nor demons below the sea, could ever dissever my soul from the soul of the beautiful Annabel Lee

Angel Bee
Member

since 2001-01-30

Posts 176
Virginia

3 posted 2001-04-28 01:54 PM

nice poem, keep writing! im me sometime,
fairybee8--im from va too :o) lata,
~ab~

*~Sometimes just holding hands is holding on to everything.~*

Ina
Senior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

4 posted 2001-04-28 05:29 PM

This was magnificent! Im really impressed by this poem. The whole flower use was amazing.

REgina

"Take a look at my face, there's no price I won't pay
To say these words to you"bon jovi

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2001-04-29 05:28 PM

This was great! i really liked the way you wrote it!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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