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My heart is running out of words
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My heart is running out of words |
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Hallucination Member
since 2001-03-18
Posts 419 |
if I could I'd turn back time to make it work for you and I I want to be with you everyday when I reach out to hold you you push me away it makes me all confused It gets harder as time goes by still I got your picture in my mind as a tear rolls slowly down spells your name on the ground if only you knew how much I really love you I just want to say the words that releasess you of your hurts make your every wish come true show how much I care for you my heart is running out of words But.. How could I be so blind not to see that we're fallen apart why couldn't I find the love within my heart why should you go away before I realized the words I had to say I miss your beautiful smile and the way you used to be every time I cried you always comforted me the look in your eye kept the rain from fallen you're always on my mind My tears are fallen to the ground I need you here with me so I'm turning the page so that my love for you'll never age my heart is running out of words |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
ok, I think you've pulled every heartstring I have!! Very touching poem  SEA |
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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
Whats a heartstring? Well, great poem. This one was full of emotions. Keep it up! *~*Amanda*~* |
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Suga_Baby Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 380Maine, USA |
Oh, this is just so beautiful and sad :*( And wow I know how you feel... "A dream is a wish your heart makes while you are fast asleep." |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Very sad  I liked it though.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Elvenblood Member
since 2001-02-17
Posts 409Maine, USA |
Aww, it's beautiful...I like how you repeated the title in there twice. This is getting a pedastal in my library! Very wonderful piece. No angels in heaven nor demons below the sea, could ever dissever my soul from the soul of the beautiful Annabel Lee |
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