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knightlyshadows
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0 posted 2001-04-27 03:40 AM


i havent got it all figured out
no, i havent even come close
im still stuck here
trying to catch up

WOAH, back up
you just lost me
right there, NO THERE
explain that to me
ok, now try english
Ummmm, there we go
i think ive got it...
got that part atleast

im still trying to catch up
but im not stuck here anymore
i havent come close to you
i havent got it all figured out

BUT im getting there
just you wait and see

that title is just a joke:P idk wut to call it

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

"at the touch of love anyone becomes a poet"

© Copyright 2001 Tiffany Durham - All Rights Reserved
vixengrl04
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1 posted 2001-04-27 10:37 AM


About being a blonde, eh?  LOL    I can definitely relate to being a blonde and not really understanding anything anyone says.  But I'm trying to improve on that!!  This is cute.  For a title, how about "Over My Head" or something along that lines.  

~*Nikki*~

~*Of all the millions of people in the world, I'm just me.*~

Godsend_1
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2 posted 2001-04-27 11:57 AM


*smacks tiffany a couple times*  wut i say about your hair.....wut i say... you remember i know you do now say it......there we go  *kisses tiffany where he smacked her* it was just a love tap though   i love you baby and its all pretty confusing i know lol maybe i be blonde to:O *smacks self* wut i saya bout my hair wuty i say

ben redshaw the great and crazy

i am what i am and that is all that i am and all that i shall ever be......so deal with it

Heavens Tears
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3 posted 2001-04-27 12:51 PM


I need to send this to a friend or two.  But I got the feeling yuou didnt mean it to be like that.  Great job!

*~*Amanda*~*

My tears roll right down my cheeks, but they all soak into my pillow.  I feel kinda sorry for it...

Allan Riverwood
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4 posted 2001-04-27 01:39 PM


I think you should get out of this abusive online relationship with Mr Redshaw.     

About the poem... er... nice job.     No critiques on this one, it's all good.
~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day.  Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.  
~Unknown

Jenn Cirrincione
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5 posted 2001-04-27 03:12 PM


Online relationship?
Do you know him in real life?

Besides Allan...you're not one to talk about those...now are ya? LOL

Cute poem!

"I've come too close to happiness, to have it swept away,don't think I can take the pain, never fall again..." Janet

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6 posted 2001-04-27 09:19 PM


Hey....I have dark ash blonde hair!!!  

Anyway nice poem!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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