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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA 
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I wrote this one when I was havin some tough times with some friends. I actually gave this one to a friend who I couldn't show her how much I appreciated her friendship any other way. (Dopey_Dope, the explanation is for you. Didn't realized you appreciated my explanations so much.  )IF If only I could let you see How much you mean to me Spend more time with you Instead of just that simple few If you could see You’re such a friend I hope our friendship Has no end If I could show you What in you I see You would see The way I wish that I could be If you disappeared one day I don’t know what I could say I’d wish I could have been a better friend With more often a hand to lend - Cody - Living From Memories Living From Thoughts There Are Some Things In Live That Cannot Be Taught [This message has been edited by CwboyAtHeart (edited 04-26-2001).] |
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AngelPoet87 Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 280Indy |
Aww, this is really good, the 3rd stanza is especially sweet, keep up da good works!! ~ali 2Good |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
no little explanation before this poem like the others  hehe well I enjoyed the poem. I liked it a lot and look forward to more in the future. ATTENTION!!!!!!!!: *just callin attention to let you know this is being added!!!* I do appreciate your explanations. I read it all Cody  I like knowing the story behind your work in specific. I appreciate your work. It's true and pure and I love it. SO keep posting and i'll keep reading.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily [This message has been edited by Dopey_Dope (edited 04-26-2001).] |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Javier got his wish.  You give in too easily, Cody. I liked this poem! I noticed lately your poetry is of a less spiritual tone than usual, it's nice to see you exploring other themes. ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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~sugarpie313~ Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 375Maine, USA |
i love this so incredibly much!! i can so relate to it... GREAT JOBValerie |
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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA |
Thank you all for your replies! I love to hear how the poem sounds to everybody else. I'm glad to hear that you could relate to it! I write to vent, to get my feelings out, so it's totally awesome to hear that somebody can actually relate to what I wrote, and that it meant something to someone. Than you all SO much for your replies! - Cody - |
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