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knightlyshadows
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obscured vision

0 posted 2001-04-26 04:05 PM


IM MOVING
leaving my room, my sanctuary
leaving my house, my home
leaving my town, my safe place
leaving my mountain, my freedom

IM LEAVING
moving to a new room, (will it be my sanctuary?)
moving to a new house, (will it be my home?)
moving to a new town, (will it be my safe place?)
moving to a new mountain, (will it be my freedom?)


i live on a mountain if u were wondering where i got mountain:P tiff

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

"at the touch of love anyone becomes a poet"

© Copyright 2001 Tiffany Durham - All Rights Reserved
MoeRocko
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1 posted 2001-04-26 04:06 PM


haha   Itll be just like home in about a week or two Tiff :P
knightlyshadows
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2 posted 2001-04-26 04:08 PM


shows wut u know ewokster:P *cries* lol
tiff *bought some new sox* heh

Godsend_1
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great state of illinois
3 posted 2001-04-26 04:29 PM


oh baby it will be ok after a while you will get used to it i know you will i love you baby *kisses tiffany to make her feel better* i love you

ben redshaw the great and deeply in love

i am what i am and that is all that i am and all that i shall ever be......so deal with it

Linc
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4 posted 2001-04-26 05:49 PM


Hey,

    This is a great poem I loved it and I am sure your new house will soon be your new home and here is something you may need *gives Tiffany a green plant*   great job again and until your next poem

                   -- Linc

"Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment."

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5 posted 2001-04-26 06:18 PM


*gives tiffany a broken remote controller that would serve for nothing and only be useful to throw at things*

Great poem. I hope you enjoy your new location!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Lakewalker
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On the streets w/ people
6 posted 2001-04-26 06:49 PM


Good job on the poem, I hope the move goes well

"Be kind for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle" Plato.

knightlyshadows
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7 posted 2001-04-26 08:01 PM


LMAO thank you for all the umm gifts   lol im sure theyll come in handAy!!!!!!!!
ill try not to kill the plant (has a cactus cuz thats all she can keep alive) and the umm broken remote will come in use very soon i believe (is also gettin a younger sibling in the move) lol ty for all the love!
tiff

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

"at the touch of love anyone becomes a poet"

Allan Riverwood
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8 posted 2001-04-26 08:35 PM


*gives Tiffany an Elvis lamp*  Take good care of this now!  It has sentimental value.  
AngelPoet87
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Indy
9 posted 2001-04-26 08:41 PM


Aww, chin up, Tiff, everything will be okay. Strangers are just friends you haven't met yet (aside from us stalkers, lol, <-- inside joke). Keep smiling

~ali

2Good
+2Be
------
4Gotten

knightlyshadows
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10 posted 2001-04-26 09:15 PM


OMG AN ELVIS LAMP   ive always, ALWAYS wanted one of these ........allan ill cherish it always *sniffs* lol
ali:P u dork lol *hugs*
ty ty guysas
tiff

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

"at the touch of love anyone becomes a poet"

williamthepoet
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11 posted 2001-04-27 01:31 AM


tiff,

i like the type styles (bold and italics).  it helps defining the feelings of security and fear.

william

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