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MoeRocko
Member

since 2001-04-25

Posts 166
West Virginia

0 posted 2001-04-25 05:59 PM

Have you seen the Sundown at Dawn?
Those crazy times when you wake
and expect a beautiful day to start
You ask yourself "How's the Weather"
you look out the window....

Dark skies rolling overhead
the sky is crying
you can't lose the shadow that takes your
personality
you feel tired after a full night's sleep
What are these days for?

As you begin to walk away
there's a break in the clouds
the sun rips through the seams
of depression
You realize, maybe God reminds you
Even though theres a sundown at sunset
It's there shining for you
You are in the palm of the Almighty
Go forth.... Be not shaken, nor stirred

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

1 posted 2001-04-25 06:00 PM

ey! first of all.."WELCOME 2 PASSIONS"
hope u like it here as i do

and the poem was good i liked it..keep writng

...?

death is not the greatest loss in life. the greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live. -norman cousins

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2001-04-25 06:02 PM

Welcome to Passions!
I enjoyed this poem greatly and hope you reply and post here frequently.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Chel
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA

3 posted 2001-04-25 06:12 PM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!! I loved this piece, the images were beautiful. Keep up the great work. Hope to read more soon.

Chel

"True friends stab you in the front."
"You are special and unique in your own way." "Always remember compliments you received; forget about the rude

LoveBug

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Member Elite

since 2000-01-08

Posts 4697

4 posted 2001-04-25 06:22 PM

Welcome to Passions!

This is a beautiful first post. A wonderfully written message of hope that we all need sometimes. Thank you for sharing.

PS-check your e-mail

"Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli
Blame Canada!

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

5 posted 2001-04-25 06:46 PM

Hey, nice job on the poem! Really nice, I mean. The first stanza was very strong. I like the last two lines of it, creative thought...
Welcome to Passions in Poetry.
~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.
~Unknown

knightlyshadows
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 791
obscured vision

6 posted 2001-04-25 07:19 PM

EWOK OMG I LIKE THIS MUCHS!!!!!!!!!
lol welcome to passions hunnay

i loves u *lix*
tiff

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

"at the touch of love anyone becomes a poet"

Godsend_1
Member

since 2001-04-19

Posts 247
great state of illinois

7 posted 2001-04-25 07:23 PM

ok wow ewok you loser now i have to stop posting poetry cuz allmy friends are so much better then me arg well grrrr later
aweseom poem ewok

ben redshaw the great and now slightly pissed

i am what i am and that is all that i am and all that i shall ever be......so deal with it

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

8 posted 2001-04-25 08:01 PM

Welcome to Passions!

This is an awesome first post.  I hope to see a lot more from you.
This is a very powerful piece.. I enjoyed it quite a bit.  Thanks for sharing!
I know you're gonna like it here