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chic Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245yellville, Ar, U.S. |
You gave Your life for me this I know is true. That is why I lift my voice is to praise only You. Each day grows harder in turmoil my heart weeps. But when we talk my heart rejoices. Your my only friend Your my only comfort. Your with me in times of dark Your with me in times of light. No other can give me this peace in which You give. No other can love me this way in which You love. Lord, I love you this you know is true. That is why you wrap your love around me and love me through and through. "Life is a game and we have to play, but in the end...we all die."-by me! |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
i liked this poem..but i'm still in that path 2 find if what u said in here is all true...very good job on discribin..keep writing   ...?death is not the greatest loss in life. the greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live. -norman cousins |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I REALLY enjoyed this poem. I knew what it was about once i finished the first stanza. VERY well done. You showed your love for the Lord in a wonderful way. Hope to read more!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
A beautiful tribute to our ever-loving Heavenly Father. I'm so glad that you know Him! Wonderful work, I enjoyed it much! Thanks for sharing.  "Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Nice job on this one, I enjoyed reading it. It flowed nicely.  ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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chic Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245yellville, Ar, U.S. |
Thanx all. It really inspires me to get such good replies. Thanx again. "Life is a game and we have to play, but in the end...we all die."-by me! |
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chic Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245yellville, Ar, U.S. |
Thanx all. It really inspires me to get such good replies. Thanx again. "Life is a game and we have to play, but in the end...we all die."-by me! |
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MindlessPoet Member
since 2001-04-20
Posts 106Texas |
That is why I lift my voice is to praise only You. that part confused me a bit... maybe its just me. Otherwise its awesome though *TiMMYBoY* |
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chic Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245yellville, Ar, U.S. |
What I meant by that phrase was...That is why I sing to only you...I sing songs about Jesus and you know religious songs like Amazing Grace and songs I write by myself. "Life is a game and we have to play, but in the end...we all die."-by me! |
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