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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
looking at a blank page from a differnt perspective is this page really bare or is it already full of things to come that i cannot perceive of a tomorrow which has not happened of this next line which i have not thought up yet of the ending which i have not yet reached now im looking at this half filled page from this differnt perspective and wondering when it was ever bare because right now it is half way full “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
*wonders if allan will c it n this one too* “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
  hahaha....Thanks for the recognition. Yeah I see it in here... a task is often complete before we ever begin, but once we begin we can't imagine how it was ever complete to begin with. Right? Just my crazy interperetation. ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
I understand the poem, but unlike Allan, I wont try to re-explain it. Great poem. *~*Amanda*~* |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
This poem was interesting.. I enjoyed it. And, Allan, I don't have a clue what you just said but I'll just pretend. *Smiles and nods.* Nice job. --Marie subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart. |
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AngelPoet87 Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 280Indy |
Good poem, kind of makes you look at alot of things a different way. I guess its kinda one of those "is the glass half empty or half full" type things. Well good job. ~ali 2Good |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Very well done. I liked it....allan seems to be getting a lot of recognition.....you sure you don't think he's cute? hehe  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Godsend_1 Member
since 2001-04-19
Posts 247great state of illinois |
*smacks dopey* she better not start thinkg he is cute *looks allan and growls* grrrrrrrr anywho its a great poem baby and i love you dearly *hugs and passaionate kisses* i love you ben redshaw the great and now and forever totally in love i am what i am and that is all that i am and all that i shall ever be......so deal with it |
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katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
wow!!! this is mind blowing. ~kate Life will always go on just remember to stay focused and positive. |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
hey this was great!! i loved the concepts behind it. a totally awesome read  "Life is not long and boring, |
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Starr Member
since 2001-02-08
Posts 100 |
This is great work. I like it a lot... It gives you a lot to think about. Keep it up! Every action of our lives touches some chord that will vibrate in eternity. |
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