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Cinch01
Junior Member

since 2001-06-19

Posts 14
RS, BR

0 posted 2001-06-21 11:27 PM

I wake up in the middle of the night
I wonder why I can’t sleep
I spent the whole night thinking
What’s wrong with me?
What is the matter?
Finally, at sun rise
My eyes close and I can rest
I dream of you and me
I wake up as like that dream was bad
What can I do to take you out of my head?
I thought I got over you.
Yesterday we talked
Bringing back old memories
Things I wanted to forget
Things I wanted to leave there
In my past
I thought I was over you
I looked at your picture and smiled
But yesterday after we talked
I turned on the radio
It was playing our song
And your picture was on the shelf
Two days ago I would have smiled
Now I could only cry.
Why don’t you understand
What goodbye means?
I wanted to keep in touch with you
I wanted to be your friend
I’m sorry, I can’t
But you can’t say I haven’t tried
It’s just too hard for me
It is just too painful.
So, once again
I’m saying goodbye
And this is definitely
The last time.

Love's Addiction
Member

since 2001-06-21

Posts 57
all around you

1 posted 2001-06-21 11:29 PM

sad.............very sad.........

if love wants me, then it can come find me

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

2 posted 2001-06-22 12:01 PM

heartfelt poem...very sad...you expressed this very well...great job

...bye

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

3 posted 2001-06-22 12:28 PM

This is a very sad poem. It's well written, but sad. Passions has seemed to move into a heartache era. I hope things work out the way you want with this situation. Nice work on the poem, I really enjoyed the read.

--Marie

"Well the sun is slowly sinking down, but the moon is slowly rising... so this old world must still be spinning 'round. And I still love you." -James

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-06-22 04:20 PM

Yes this was such a sad poem. *sigh* I felt it hard.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

angel_2401
Member

since 2001-06-12

Posts 131
Cincinnati, OH

5 posted 2001-06-22 04:59 PM

Wow, I know how this one is... But this is really good. I like this one a lot. Can't wait til your next one.

I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem.

I'm a nobody, nobody is perfect, therefore I'm perfect.

obscurity of cloud
Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 294
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6 posted 2001-06-22 05:13 PM

i feel for you, cinch. you've written this very well; i especially like the way it closes. Good job!

"so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost

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