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Fading Away
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0 posted 04-23-2001 08:49 PM       View Profile for Fading Away   Email Fading Away   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Fading Away

Never has a laugh
touched my heart,
Like a soft caress
from a lovers hand.
Never a smile lighted my way
as life closes in
around me.

Wrapped secure in your passion
I sigh and snuggle deeper
into your heart.
Safe and warm,
I feel your rich voice
wash over this tired soul.
Healing the hurts,
renewing my spirit.

Secure in your love,
I rest...

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

© Copyright 2001 Jennifer Floyd - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 04-23-2001 09:14 PM       View Profile for Allan Riverwood   Email Allan Riverwood   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Allan Riverwood

Aww, this is nice.  Ben will be so pleased.     
Wonderful to be in love, ain't it?  
~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day.Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.
~Unknown

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2 posted 04-23-2001 09:26 PM       View Profile for Heavens Tears   Email Heavens Tears   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Heavens Tears

Awww.  Whos Ben?  He must be your significant other, Im sure.

*~*Amanda*~*

*If the only place I can live my dreams is in my sleep, then I'll sleep forever!*

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3 posted 04-23-2001 11:11 PM       View Profile for anonymous albert ?   Email anonymous albert ?   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for anonymous albert ?

sorry i think i scared peoples away..
so i decided to edit this..hehe sorry..

and the poem itself was wonderful..
i really enjoyed this one marie
and keep writing...
until next time ...

...?

death is not the greatest loss in life. the greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live. -norman cousins

[This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 04-24-2001).]

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4 posted 04-24-2001 01:44 PM       View Profile for Linc   Email Linc   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Linc

Hey,

      This is absolutely superb as most all of your works are, the guy you are talking about oh and Allan before I forget who said it was for Ben hrm could have been about me hahaha. Anyway back to the poem its great and will grace the top spots of my library as all of your work does. Until your next poem

"Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment."

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5 posted 04-24-2001 02:20 PM       View Profile for knightlyshadows   Email knightlyshadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for knightlyshadows

aww that was great. its goin into me library
tiff

A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.

"at the touch of love anyone becomes a poet"

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6 posted 04-24-2001 10:17 PM       View Profile for Dopey Dope   Email Dopey Dope   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dopey Dope

Great job here! This was really really good!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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7 posted 04-29-2001 10:19 PM       View Profile for Acies   Email Acies   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Acies

I don't know bout these guys, but WOW!!!
This poem is awesome
I love it a lot
One of the best ones I've read in the forum
Amazing Fading, simply amazing
keep it up

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee."W.S.

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8 posted 04-30-2001 07:55 PM       View Profile for xShUgArHiGhx   Email xShUgArHiGhx   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit xShUgArHiGhx's Home Page   View IP for xShUgArHiGhx

This was so sweet and so full of emotion!! I really enjoyed this one =o)
knightlyshadows
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9 posted 06-01-2001 05:17 AM       View Profile for knightlyshadows   Email knightlyshadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for knightlyshadows

okays sorry i couldnt helps it....i was goin through my library and came across this and wanted more ppl to get the chance to read it..so umm yea *bump* :P
tiff

A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.

Where are you when i need you....?

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10 posted 12-11-2001 11:10 AM       View Profile for anonymousfemale   Email anonymousfemale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for anonymousfemale

A Ben, huh?  
Well it is a beautiful piece of writing. The images and sentiments are so touching.

Thanks for the read. Be proud now.  

~AF~

"Always keep focus on your dreams because most often than not that's all you'll have." - Javier

 
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