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sleepymoongirl
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0 posted 2001-04-22 10:17 PM


Patience is a vertue
That most people know
nothing of
Except a selected few
They are called the watchers
They sit and watch
Trying to find out
The mystery of life
The most complicated
Journey of all
That just never will end
For everyone is ever changing
Alwayz wearing a new mask
To hide who they are
What brings on this shame of who we are


© Copyright 2001 Scarlet Saunders - All Rights Reserved
Low Man's Lyric
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In a dream
1 posted 2001-04-22 10:22 PM


After reading this I thought that I might be a watcher myself. Cool poem, hope to read more from you.

Give her two red roses, each with a note. The first note says "For the woman I love" and the second, "For my best friend."  
~Anonymous

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2 posted 2001-04-22 11:09 PM


Great topic.  I like it a lot.  You have some serious talent my friend.  Keep up the good work and pls share more  

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee."  W.S.

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3 posted 2001-04-23 01:23 AM


Chilling.  I look forward to reading more of your work.  
~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day.  Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.  
~Unknown

Godsend_1
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4 posted 2001-04-23 09:34 AM


wow scarlet you do have a great talent hun unlike others here *cough*me*cough*   anywho scarlet keep posting them hun your great *hugs* i love ya

i am what i am and that is all that i am and all that i shall ever be......so deal with it

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5 posted 2001-04-23 11:25 AM


"Trying to find out
The mystery of life
The most complicated
Journey of all"

How true!  I liked this a lot.  You're a very good poet.  Keep sharing your work  
Nicely done!

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

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6 posted 2001-04-24 03:47 PM


So the watchers just sit there? Hmmmm....well it's not my fav. poem by you, but nonetheless it did have some good thoughts.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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