The only real serious gripe I have, is the font type and color. I like to let my eyes "fall" naturally through a poem, and this one was just really hard for me to read (shaddup - I'm getting old, and the eyes aren't as good as they used to be!) I spent more time trying to read, than just enjoying it. Yanno?
So - that out of the way...
The last two lines, particularly, grab hold - and just won't let go. Something to be whispered. Sweet, tranquil, and romantic - just lovely.