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fozzyozzy
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since 2001-03-15
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0 posted 2001-04-22 01:33 AM


Happy for You

Whatever pleases you
To your happiness
A toast
To burn down your false hopes
Cheers
After the party
I'm still alone
Congratulations
You can lie to yourself
Good work
Someone should be proud
Their wishes come true
Sacrifice
It could have been me
Familiar
Who would've thought dreams come true
I can be happy for you
Celebrate
Got what you want
alone
Too alone once again
My mistakes a burning knife
deep
I twist it myself
Satisfaction
Maybe now we'll realize
Not to boast so
happy
Some don't need smiles
But pity

"The heart can think of no devotion
Greater than being shore to ocean
Holding the curve of one position
Counting an endless repetition"
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© Copyright 2001 Sean Michael DeFlora - All Rights Reserved
AngelPoet87
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Indy
1 posted 2001-04-22 01:35 AM


This poem is really really great. So emotionally deep, yet leaves the mind something to ponder. Great job.

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2 posted 2001-04-22 02:11 AM


Well done here. I enjoyed this. I think you got a lot of talent.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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3 posted 2001-04-22 02:12 AM


i really liked this one..
great job!!
and keep writing

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death is not the greatest loss in life. the greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live. -norman cousins

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4 posted 2001-04-22 02:31 AM


I love the unique format, excellent job Ozz!  
~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day.  Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.  
~Unknown

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5 posted 2001-04-23 08:54 PM


I really enjoyed this one!
Nice work!

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

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