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sleepymoongirl
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0 posted 2001-04-21 10:30 PM


You ask me why i would want someone like you
I ask you how could i not
You bring such joy to my life
Of which i don't get much of
I am not much to look at
The scars of my life shine down
You look right past that
All you show me is love
where I thought I wouldn't be able to find any
Show me the rainbow at the end of the storm
remind me there is a gateway of hope at the end
Helped me to learn to love myself
You don't get the chance...
To have a friend like that everyday
And you ask me why i would want a friend like you
maybe the question should be who wouldn't?



as u go in life there will be ur hardships it is up to u if it makes u or breaks u.  

[This message has been edited by sleepymoongirl (edited 04-21-2001).]

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Godsend_1
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1 posted 2001-04-21 10:43 PM


thank you scarlet so much i feel so alone in this world i some times wonder why i am here and i feel all alone i am glad i have you as a friend scarlet you know just wut to say and how i feel i love you and thank you

i am what i am and that is all that i am and all that i shall ever be......so deal with it

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2 posted 2001-04-21 10:57 PM


Well done here.
Very sweet, especially the ending.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

knightlyshadows
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3 posted 2001-04-22 12:31 PM


god scarlet you are great! i love you!
tiff

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

"at the touch of love anyone becomes a poet"

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4 posted 2001-04-22 02:22 AM


*group hug*  aww  
Godsend_1
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5 posted 2001-04-22 02:28 AM


*gives all you special ppl a great big group hug* i love you all
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6 posted 2001-04-22 02:30 AM


*coughs*cliche*coughs*

...?

knightlyshadows
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7 posted 2001-04-22 02:49 AM


lol hush:P   *licks all her ppls* heh
tiff

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

"at the touch of love anyone becomes a poet"

Godsend_1
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8 posted 2001-04-22 02:52 AM


you wanna go albert i bet i could take you lol jk and my group hug was better cuz ummm it was mine yea that is it so hush fool hehehehe

i am what i am and that is all that i am and all that i shall ever be......so deal with it

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9 posted 2001-04-22 02:54 AM


*gets licked*
*says huh ?*
*not knowin what that was*
*instinct just tells 2 lick back*
*so licks back 2 tiff*

hehe..ok tiff but stop licking

...?

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10 posted 2001-04-22 02:56 AM


awwwwww..i wanna join in!!

*hugs EVERYBODY in sight!*

the poem was really cute...i think everybody has had that said to them or has siad it to sumbody before..its really really nice when it does happen..

"Life is not long and boring,
it's short and compelling." -Javier Agosto-

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11 posted 2001-04-22 02:59 AM


what?
ur gonna sit on me man....
alright i'm koo.. but yea...
jus look at ur replys and u'll c y i'm actin this..its gettin annoyin
hehe alright man..i was jus playin wit u..haha..i wont mess wit ur little crew nomore

p.s. u would regret if u take me cuz i'll kick ur A** 2 freaky mars.. eh?
so don't even go there buddy...
...?

death is not the greatest loss in life. the greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live. -norman cousins

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12 posted 2001-04-22 02:59 AM


awwwwww..i wanna join in!!

*hugs EVERYBODY in sight!*

the poem was really cute...i think everybody has had that said to them or has siad it to sumbody before..its really really nice when it does happen..

"Life is not long and boring,
it's short and compelling." -Javier Agosto-

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13 posted 2001-04-22 03:01 AM


awww but i only lick if i likes u *pouts* and wut made u think i was lickin u eh? lol u assumed that u were one of my ppls didnt ya:P lol *licks albert just cuz she can* heh ya likes that?
tiff

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

"at the touch of love anyone becomes a poet"

cherish
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14 posted 2001-04-22 03:01 AM


awwwwww..i wanna join in!!

*hugs EVERYBODY in sight!*

the poem was really cute...i think everybody has had that said to them or has siad it to sumbody before..its really really nice when it does happen..

"Life is not long and boring,
it's short and compelling." -Javier Agosto-

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15 posted 2001-04-22 03:07 AM


lol *thinks cherish REALLY wants to join in*
*hugs & licks cherish* lol there u go hunNaY!
tiff  

yay i just figured out how to edit lol

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

"at the touch of love anyone becomes a poet"


[This message has been edited by knightlyshadows (edited 04-22-2001).]

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16 posted 2001-04-22 03:09 AM


Don't come in here and mess with Albert!!       This group hug is over!  
No, Tiff... you don't have to stop licking me.     
If only everyone shared Cherish's enthusiasm about this thread.     (I've never seen a triple-reply being spaced out with another reply in between each one!)

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17 posted 2001-04-22 03:11 AM


ok its cool albert we buds now ok lol and umm baby i think ya need to keep your tongue inside your mouth ok i mean in yours or mine that is the only place it belongs so no more licking ok and no more hugs or i might get really jealous and make a kill list again ok mwahahahahah   *tries to destract you crazy ppl* look over there *points* its a purple penguin a a blue monkey  heheh they be playiong to gether aint it cute lol  ok you guys here at passions rock ok i love ya all later ppl

i am what i am and that is all that i am and all that i shall ever be......so deal with it

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18 posted 2001-04-22 03:17 AM


awwwww i love you allan *hugs* we just playing we all good buds here lol   hey arent you guys all upset i joined cuz now ya got a freak in your midsts mwahahahahah ....look green dog ate a pink cat wow this is a crazy place  anywho bye bye for now

i am what i am and that is all that i am and all that i shall ever be......so deal with it

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19 posted 2001-04-22 03:18 AM


not exactly buds
but jus acknowledgin others presence....

...?

knightlyshadows
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20 posted 2001-04-22 03:18 AM


lol@yalls :P
cherish ur kewls hunNay!!
albert i would of kept on lickin u just to bug u if u had a prob with it:P heh
ben awwws i be doin more then lickin u babAy   dont u worrys bout that
omg lookies its a purple penguin ane a blue monkey:O *jumps on em* I CAUGHT THE MONKaY!!!
yay *does the i caught the blue monkAy dance*
tiff

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

"at the touch of love anyone becomes a poet"

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21 posted 2001-04-22 03:20 AM


Godsend_1 ---->    <----- Me

I love you too bro!  

knightlyshadows
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22 posted 2001-04-22 03:27 AM


allan ben said i should marry u  
*sniffs* cuz i said u be kewl and he said if u like him so much marry him  
*wants to marry ben*
    *hides from ben cuz he will be mayad after he sees this*
tiff


“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

"at the touch of love anyone becomes a poet"

[This message has been edited by knightlyshadows (edited 04-22-2001).]

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23 posted 2001-04-22 03:31 AM


I'm already marrying Carly.  we're engaged.     *shows the pretty ring*  ooh idn't it pretty?    

And why would I marry someone who only replies in one thread?  Go back and read something else, you crazy kids!  Or check out the Explorer forum, where this kind of behavior is encouraged!   It's right at this link here!
There ya go!  It's a lot of fun!  
~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day.  Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.  
~Unknown

[This message has been edited by Allan Riverwood (edited 04-22-2001).]

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24 posted 2001-04-22 03:32 AM


awwww i sorry baby i was just messing *allan you better not touch my girl she is the love of my life* * is planning on marrying her* i love you baby you make me whole  *kisses tiffany passionatly and holds her close to him*

i am what i am and that is all that i am and all that i shall ever be......so deal with it

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25 posted 2001-04-22 03:34 AM


lol u be doin it too allan:P
:O u sayin im not good enuff for u   *is hurteded* *jumps on ben* lol i love you *was kisseded* lol *blushes*
tiff


“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

"at the touch of love anyone becomes a poet"

[This message has been edited by knightlyshadows (edited 04-22-2001).]

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26 posted 2001-04-22 03:39 AM


one word "SHALLOW" pplz take allan's advice and go there.....Pleasseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
and all this kind of stuff u guys be sayin must WE know????????????????
pplz grow up ya'll...


...?

death is not the greatest loss in life. the greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live. -norman cousins

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27 posted 2001-04-22 03:45 AM


It's OK Al, it's their thread.  
Godsend_1
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28 posted 2001-04-22 03:45 AM


ok sorry guys we will be cool now i apolagize for all this i will see you all later ok and keep up the awesome work you guys produce and again i am sorry about this

i am what i am and that is all that i am and all that i shall ever be......so deal with it

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29 posted 2001-04-22 03:53 AM


no problem.. man
also no need for sorries
so...yea lets jus not have to go thru this again.

...?

death is not the greatest loss in life. the greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live. -norman cousins

[This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 04-22-2001).]

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30 posted 2001-04-22 04:10 AM


What's going on here....c'mon guys....we have a discussion forum for this kinda stuff....it's called teen explorer....stick to commenting on the poem.

NICE POEM! <------


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31 posted 2001-04-22 04:15 AM


thats exactly allans advice dopey
it got carried away thou.......

...?

death is not the greatest loss in life. the greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live. -norman cousins

[This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 04-22-2001).]

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32 posted 2001-04-22 08:22 AM


Woah.... what's going on in this thread???
Everyone is licking people, and marrying people.... craziness. You guys....you're really something...Ok... I don't want to ruin your fun...go on about your business!


Oh...lol... nice poem!!

"I've come too close to happiness, to have it swept away,don't think I can take the pain, never fall again..." Janet

sleepymoongirl
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33 posted 2001-04-22 12:42 PM


laughs wow so this is what my poem brings out in people hmmmmmmmmm should i be worried?
nah laughs hope u all liked my poem?

as u go in life there will be ur hardships it is up to u if it makes u or breaks u.  

Godsend_1
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34 posted 2001-04-22 03:47 PM


lol scarlet you are the coolest girl ever dork   yups this is wut you do to us scarlet you make us all happy and cheerfull cuz you gots a gift and i love you *hugs*

i am what i am and that is all that i am and all that i shall ever be......so deal with it

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35 posted 2001-04-22 05:27 PM


The poem is defenitely sweet and it seems like it did hit it's mark    Beautiful read.  keep sharing

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee."  W.S.

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36 posted 2001-04-23 08:34 PM


I really like this poem!
And wow.. I think knightlyshadows does too..
Nice job!

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

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