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princess^sarah
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0 posted 2001-04-20 07:46 PM

Heres another LOVELY poem dedicated to my great buddy allan

Though his hair has turned to grey
His skin wrinkled every where;
I still love him,as before;
and let him know I care.

Though his teeth are not his own
His hearing not the same
I will listen carefully;
when he calls my name

Though his pace is slower now
His mind is not as keen
I will cherish fondlely;
all we've done and seen

Though the years have changed him
He's not what he used to be
Time has changed alot in life;
except his love for me.

hmmm i didn't know what to write bout you so i made this one.. lol

© Copyright 2001 sarah alford - All Rights Reserved

Allan Riverwood

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1 posted 2001-04-20 08:23 PM

*rocks back and forth in his chair*
Those darned kids, writin' poetry like theys owns tha place...

Hey what are you talking about???

I'm not old!
Hehe... this made me laugh, so I like it!

~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.
~Unknown

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2 posted 2001-04-20 09:09 PM

allan r u sure ur not that age

isn't that ur grandson's picture in ur profile....
hehe.. lol..but yea this was a nice poem
keep writin

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3 posted 2001-04-20 11:40 PM

ha ha...i love it
careful Allan, your teeth might fall off

lol j/k
awesome

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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4 posted 2001-04-21 12:18 PM

hahaha!!
I'm not going to let Allan forget about this one! Hair.. teeth.. hahaha!
Very nice, Sarah! Thanks for the laugh.. I needed that tonight

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

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5 posted 2001-04-21 01:30 AM

Allan the old fart......haha
Great tribute!

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