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Tamma
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0 posted 2001-04-20 05:58 PM


Sit down, Hun . . .

There’s something I have to tell you,
Don’t be scared, please, don’t be sad.
Here, take my hand, hold onto it,
Will, I have to let you know . . .

It’s nothing bad, I promise you,
So can you smile for me please?

I’ve known you for awhile now,
And each day the love deepens.
I’m slowly moving on,
Please bear with me now.

I know it annoys you,
And I’m sorry for that.

I’m doing better now,
A smile starts to show.
But what you don’t know,
Is that this smile is for you.

I love being with you,
I love it when you hold me tight.

Will, I’ve told him goodbye,
Because I want to be with you.
I’m putting my faith in your promises,
Please, don’t back out on them now.


For anyone that posts in Explorer, you know that I'm having a rough time lately, and the issue with Justin is just one of them. I'm trying to work forward, and I'm trying as well to get thru everything else, but this year is becoming overwhelming for me.

Those girls on TV don't know that being
36-24-36 doesn't mean a thing unless
you got the face to back it up

© Copyright 2001 Tamma M. Wilson - All Rights Reserved
Allan Riverwood
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1 posted 2001-04-20 08:19 PM


Best of luck with the future too, Tamma.     We're all pulling for you.
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2 posted 2001-04-20 11:24 PM


This might be one of your best poems, or probably your best so far.  Talking about Passions in Poetry.  This is it.  hope things go your way soon Tamma.  good luck

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee."  W.S.

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3 posted 2001-04-20 11:55 PM


I understand that times must be hard for ya right now.  I wish you all the luck I can give.  I can only hope that things get better for you.
Good luck.  I liked this poem a lot.

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

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4 posted 2001-04-20 11:59 PM


i was hoping u would come back..and you did, i was getting worried for a lil while there..good poem...and hope everything turns out for the best  

   *KiM*

" im surrounded by people, but yet im still all alone"

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5 posted 2001-04-21 12:42 PM


I don't know you, Tamma, 'cause I just came here, but I hope the best for you.  Nice poem!

*TiMMYBoY*
Yeah, that's me.  The Weird One.

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6 posted 2001-04-21 02:00 AM


Nicely done Tamma....Glad to see you posting  
I hope things get ok with you soon....I'm here for you gal!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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7 posted 2001-04-21 08:30 AM


Yeah... I'm glad you're still posting. I'm sorry for your problems, boys and feelings can be a real pain. Good luck with everything. This was really good.

"I've come too close to happiness, to have it swept away,don't think I can take the pain, never fall again..." Janet

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8 posted 2001-04-21 04:25 PM


be strong, keep writing
ab

*~Sometimes just holding hands is holding on to everything.~*

Linc
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9 posted 2001-04-21 06:57 PM


Nice

         -- Linc

"Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment."

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10 posted 2001-04-23 08:14 AM


Tamma, may your year be far less, uh, painful than mine was/is.  From August 25, 2000(and a little b4 then) and on has been complete and total hell for me. I'm here if you ever want to talk.  Good poem.

I wish people would stop telling me that I can do anything I want to.  I never thought that I couldn't.
Life's tough, get a helmet.

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