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Fading Away
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0 posted 04-20-2001 02:12 PM       View Profile for Fading Away   Email Fading Away   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Fading Away

Sometimes,
I feel lost, so lost.
As if I am frozen in time,
But the world is moving on,
And no one stops to care,
About what is happening
to me.

Sometimes,
I feel trapped, so trapped.
Like I can't get out,
And the world is closing in,
But no one stops to help,
When I cannot
break free.

Sometimes,
I feel alone, so alone.
As if I had no friends,
But the world just doesn't care,
And no one stops to feel,
How hurt I am
inside.

Sometimes,
I feel scared, so scared.
Like I will always be the same,
And the world will keep on changing,
But no one stops to see,
Just why i don't
fit in.

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

© Copyright 2001 Jennifer Floyd - All Rights Reserved
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great poem...
i totally related to that.
its how i exactly feel
not sometimes but all the time..
i think u have a lot that u went thru and still is also.
so i really hope that everything works out for u in the future cause i knoe how its like.
and this poem was just amazin' keep writing marie....bye

...?
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2 posted 04-20-2001 02:36 PM       View Profile for Acies   Email Acies   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Acies

hey girl ~*hugs*~, and I'm not gonna let go  
we're here you know
so stop feeling this way

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee."  W.S.

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3 posted 04-20-2001 08:01 PM       View Profile for Allan Riverwood   Email Allan Riverwood   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Allan Riverwood

Sometimes is an important word in here...    It's even a relief.  
~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day.  Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.  
~Unknown

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4 posted 04-21-2001 01:15 AM       View Profile for Dopey Dope   Email Dopey Dope   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dopey Dope

I'm with you Marie. I feel so alone.....very alone, in fact. I thuoght this poem coincided with my emotions perfectly right now. Very well done here.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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I like what you had to say.. and I can relate with some of it.  Keep writing  

*TiMMYBoY*
Yeah, that's me.  The Weird One.

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6 posted 04-21-2001 05:04 PM       View Profile for Linc   Email Linc   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Linc

Hey,

         WOW how did I miss this its first time around? Oh well I get to enjoy it now, I liked it alot. I just want to let you know I am your friend   anyway its still a superb poem

                              -- Linc

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7 posted 04-21-2001 07:56 PM       View Profile for Angel Bee   Email Angel Bee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Angel Bee

this was good, keep writing,
ab

*~Sometimes just holding hands is holding on to everything.~*

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8 posted 04-21-2001 08:01 PM       View Profile for Jenn Cirrincione   Email Jenn Cirrincione   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jenn Cirrincione

Wow. I totally felt this one. I really can relate to this. Keep writing!!

"I've come too close to happiness, to have it swept away,don't think I can take the pain, never fall again..." Janet

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9 posted 12-11-2001 11:08 AM       View Profile for anonymousfemale   Email anonymousfemale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for anonymousfemale

Gee, Allan has made a lot of good points in your replies.  

"Sometimes,
I feel scared, so scared.
Like I will always be the same,
And the world will keep on changing,
But no one stops to see,
Just why i don't
fit in"

I think we've all been there and know how you feel. Nonetheless, it is a great piece. You're truly a brilliant writer. You need to write a book or something.  

Thanks for sharing.

~AF~

"Always keep focus on your dreams because most often than not that's all you'll have." - Javier

 
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