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boarderfreak9
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0 posted 2001-04-20 12:48 PM


          YOU MEAN THE WORLD TO ME

this is 4 my girl.
i rely on you,
and your always there,
and i thank you 4 being stong,
when im at my weakest point.

you mean the world to me,
and i wont let you go with out a fight,
cuz you mean just that much,
just that much to me.

i hope you last long ,
as long as i have something to hold on to,
i hope and i pray,
that i can say its you.

id give my life,
for you to live ,
and id would die happy,
know your alive.

i cant ask you  more,
than just to be with you,
because you are my girl,
and you mean the wold to me.

© Copyright 2001 boarderfreak9 - All Rights Reserved
anonymous albert ?
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1 posted 2001-04-20 01:06 AM


welcome to passions hope u like it here and very good first post!

the meaing was a nice one...
but i gotta say ur lucky 2 at least have some1 to lift u up at ur weak times unlike me where i stay weak...as i hold on by myself and i'll write a poem on that someday hope u'll read it.
anyways good job

...?

[This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 04-20-2001).]

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2 posted 2001-04-20 02:50 AM


Welcome to Passions!
This is a sweet first post. Very enjoyable. Hope to see you post and reply more!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Child of the Stars
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3 posted 2001-04-20 07:19 AM


WELCOME to our wonderful world. I enjoyed this first poem, so sweet...Well I hope to see you enjoy yourself here! And check your e-mail.  
  ~Carly

There is pleasure in poetic pains which only poets know......~Unknown

keoni
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4 posted 2001-04-20 10:26 AM


This was a very nice first post. You are extremely lucky to have found someone who you care about so much. Hope to see you around some more
Jon

"Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine
"Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur

banburycross
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viginia
5 posted 2001-04-20 12:46 PM


Welcome to passions!!

this is a great first post, i'm glad that you have someone like this in your life, that's always good times.  i hope to read lots more from you in the future, so keep posting your work.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

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6 posted 2001-04-20 12:51 PM


Welcome to Passions!  

Very nice first post.  I enjoyed reading this very much, and I'm looking forward to seeing more.  Keep writing, reading, sharing, replying, and posting  
Again, welcome and very nice job.

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

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7 posted 2001-04-20 01:54 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!

Nice to see you've decided to join our family here in Passions for Poetry.  Hope you enjoy  

What a wonderful first post.  You did really good.  Thanks for sharing with us your poetry

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee."  W.S.

Allan Riverwood
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8 posted 2001-04-20 08:00 PM


I did enjoy this poem!  Welcome to Passions!
~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day.  Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.  
~Unknown

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9 posted 2001-04-22 11:46 AM


Welcome to passions!!!!

This was a very cute and a very sweet first post!!! I hope you like it here just as much as the rest of us! I cant wait to read more from u  

Bishop
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10 posted 2001-04-22 12:14 PM


Good first poem.  Keep it up!!!!  I know what u mean.  I'm the same with my bird!
Lakewalker
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11 posted 2001-04-22 04:52 PM


Welome to Passions!
Good job on this first post, I hope to see you around here more

"Be kind for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle" Plato.  
Ever tried the Teen Explorer Forum?

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12 posted 2001-04-22 07:10 PM


Oooh very nice! As usual I'm a bit late... but eh, better late than never!!!

"I've come too close to happiness, to have it swept away,don't think I can take the pain, never fall again..." Janet

Suga_Baby
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13 posted 2001-04-22 09:04 PM


Es MUY precioso! *L* Did I say that right? Ah whatever, you get the point-- this was SO sweet   *wipes a tear*  

"A dream is a wish your heart makes while you are fast asleep."

sleepymoongirl
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14 posted 2001-04-22 09:13 PM


thats a super sweet poem.  nice flow
now to watch the baby dance!!!



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