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A Dedication To Everyone In Passions
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A Dedication To Everyone In Passions |
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Low Man's Lyric Member
since 2001-04-03
Posts 236In a dream |
This poem is for everyone in Passions, plus I want to anounce that I now have over one hundred posts!! YES I hit the triple digits, any way here's the poem. Wondering the net and searching for poems, I happen to stumble on Passions forums. I only wanted a place to post my writing, about love, hate, jealousy and fighting. But in this place I found alot more, each person here has emotions to explore. I felt welcomed right away, which of course made me stay. You can write about love or a kiss on the lips, do it wrong and you'll get one of Allans tips. Jot down whats on your mind and let it be, you will get nice and warm replies, wait and see. There is a question that is old and maybe lame, but I wonder, will we ever know Acire's real name? We should let that go and talk about spam in a cup, IsGona is funny and I seem to crack him up. There are other people here I do admire highly, like Dopey and his famous smoking cigar smiley. This place is great and I care about you all, if you feel hurt, remember to stand proud and tall. I want to say thanks for all the poems you guys do, they are all great, so this ones for YOU! Give her two red roses, each with a note. The first note says "For the woman I love" and the second, "For my best friend." |
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Low Man's Lyric Member
since 2001-04-03
Posts 236In a dream |
I hope you all enjoy it. Give her two red roses, each with a note. The first note says "For the woman I love" and the second, "For my best friend." |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
lol that was cute  But where was I in there??  LOL just kidding...oh and im the only person that knows Acire's real name in all of Passions. Aren't you jealous?? I wont budge either..ask anyone But newho..keep up the great work.*dq -=We often get hurt when we trust someone we want them to be instead of who they really are=- |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
hehe.. that was nice and thats how felt when i came here. great idea. nice poem  b.u..t...bb..u.t!!! HOW could U have forgotten bout me?  i can't believe this man..  now u jus left me....................  though..i jus gotta tell u this............... i say REVISE,REVISE,REVISE!!!!!!!!!what? ur not?  u better or else  ...."X" ...?[This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 04-20-2001).] |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Allan's tip - Don't write poems about people in particular, you always miss someone out. Especially if you only write about four people.  haha...Good job, but hey everyone he's still new. He doesn't know the real us. He doesn't even know Acire's real name by now! It's SO obvious. ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
heheheh..that was great..i cant rhyme a poem for jack!!..but you did well...congrats on that especially cuz you were conversing with the reader.. ..i guess all the big'un were mentioned ...good on you! "Life is not long and boring, |
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Dopey Dope
Moderator
Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I don't know why everybody is fussing over not getting mentioned. I know *I'M* happy with the poem I thought it was sweet and great and awesome...especially the lines about me. Yep yep...and Pepe---->  <----Yep I've even named him. hehe Anyhow....yer a sweet guy Low man  hehe.... I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
*wonders if acire's name is eric maybe* lol i liked that alot and id have to agree that ALL OF YALL r a great bunch!!!!!! thanx for welcoming me....i needed it muchs! tiff  |
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Low Man's Lyric Member
since 2001-04-03
Posts 236In a dream |
Sorry about not adding everyone to this poem, but I didn't want to make too long. Well thanks banburycross, Sabriel.s.h.lover, Deranger, lonely*soul, LoneWolf, Hand Me Down, Fading Away, cherish, Dopey_Dope, Allan Riverwood, anonymous albert ?, knightlyshadows, Dark Enchantress, Child of the Stars, Ina, katherine, Heavens Tears, keoni, Linc, AsBurYAnGel, silvrduck, xShUgArHiGhx, Lakewalker, chas, Elvenblood, AngelShell, acire, Jenn Cirrincione, and of course DancinQueen for all your previous replies you sent me. (I hope I got you all)Give her two red roses, each with a note. The first note says "For the woman I love" and the second, "For my best friend." ~Anonymous [This message has been edited by Low Man's Lyric (edited 04-22-2001).] |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
Well i got mentioned in your response, so that's good enough for me i try to respond to most of your work, you have a lot of talent. i dunno, i really wish more people would respond, there are too many people that post lots of stuff and don't respond any, but i'm glad that you aren't like that at all. anyway, this is great, very cute. keep posting all your work.Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
This is a very nice tribute, Low Man's! You're as cherished here at Passions as everyone else, remember that. You have a lot of talent, and everyone enjoys readin what you have to share. But keep in mind Allan's tip Very beautiful tribute.I enjoyed the read. --Marie subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart. |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
*cheers* YOU DA BOMB!!!!!!! Hahaha...spam in a cup.........hahahhaha.......*grins* PEACE! ~Carly There is pleasure in poetic pains which only poets know......~Unknown [This message has been edited by Child of the Stars (edited 04-20-2001).] |
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Hand Me Down Junior Member
since 2001-04-08
Posts 32WV |
ROCK! This is awsome! "Cause I can't fix something this complex anymore than I can build a rose" |
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Starr Member
since 2001-02-08
Posts 100 |
Hey... this was well done, it's exactly how I felt when I first joined.... thnax for posting, keep it up! Every action of our lives touches some chord that will vibrate in eternity. |
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Godsend_1 Member
since 2001-04-19
Posts 247great state of illinois |
oh i get it dont mention the new guy huh that right i no body special nope not me i just a little ole loser lol just messing man its a really cool poem and i have to tell you i love it here i feel like i can express myself and not be judged so thank you for creating a great enviroment later my new found friends, oh and baby look at arice name i very much doubt it is eric ok see the a it prolly erica lol sorry that just a guess later friends i am what i am and that is all that i am and all that i shall ever be......so deal with it [This message has been edited by Godsend_1 (edited 04-21-2001).] |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
sooo i guess this means no revise..huh ? ...?death is not the greatest loss in life. the greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live. -norman cousins [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 04-21-2001).] |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
This was cute... but hey now!! Where was I in this mix?? Now I'm very offended....lol That's ok....I will remember this around Christmas time!!! "I've come too close to happiness, to have it swept away,don't think I can take the pain, never fall again..." Janet |
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Angel Bee Member
since 2001-01-30
Posts 176Virginia |
This was really good. I liked it. Keep writing! Good job on triple digits! ~ab~ *~Sometimes just holding hands is holding on to everything.~* |
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MindlessPoet Member
since 2001-04-20
Posts 106Texas |
hehe, I liked that poem. As a newbie that's sorta how I feel.. everyone so welcoming hehe*TiMMYBoY* |
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Kicking Kim Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 426Cloud Cucko Land! |
brilliant poem, this is brilliant and I'm sure I speak for everyone when I say it was so easy to relate to! Well done! ^*~Kicking Kim~*^ "Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression" |
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Linc
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
Darn man your making me misty eyed :'( this was wonderful -- Linc "Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment." |
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Dopey Dope
Moderator
Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
*turns on his lighter and sways from side to side while holding Kim's hand* c'mon everybody....sway... I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Godsend_1 Member
since 2001-04-19
Posts 247great state of illinois |
*grabs his lighter and lights it and sways with dopey while holding tiffanys hand* everbody now join in i am what i am and that is all that i am and all that i shall ever be......so deal with it |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
*doesnt have a lighter* *shakes her bootaay for ben cuz she likes to be differnt* sorry had to do it guys lol! tiff “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
*hands out glowsticks* |
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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA |
::takes one of Allan's glowsticks and sways with everybody:: Okay, ya'll probably don't know me. I'm pretty new here, but you looked like you were having fun and I felt left out. lol Looking forward to talking and getting to know everybody more. |
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Low Man's Lyric Member
since 2001-04-03
Posts 236In a dream |
Im sorry Jenn, I edited it so now your name is on there. Oh and to show you that im sorry im sending you spam by Fed Ex. Give her two red roses, each with a note. The first note says "For the woman I love" and the second, "For my best friend." |
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Dopey Dope
Moderator
Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
*sways with everybody and invites the Cowboy to sing a diddy* |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
*takes Cowboys hand and sways* all together now... MY flag boy said to your flag boy...sittin by the fire...my flag boy said to your flag boy im going to set your flag on fire....  "Life is not long and boring, |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Editing? I see no editing? But that's ok... I'll still accept the spam...lol Glowsticks? Guys.... no getting in trouble around here...hehe All you rock-n-roll kids cause trouble!!!! "I've come too close to happiness, to have it swept away,don't think I can take the pain, never fall again..." Janet |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
crap I'm late... nice tribute low man. Very thoughtful... this place kicks butt, as you have already figured out, and I think you did a wonderful job includeing just the most important ppl... lol Jason [This message has been edited by IsGona (edited 04-22-2001).] |
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MindlessPoet Member
since 2001-04-20
Posts 106Texas |
I'm with dopey... Cowboy sing a diddy! *TiMMYBoY* |
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Dopey Dope
Moderator
Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Cherish! What on earth has gotten into you?! I said for the COWBOY to sing a diddy, not for you to sing about a flag boy setting flags on fire! haha |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
*grabs glow stick* This is fun......  "Be kind for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle" Plato. Ever tried the Teen Explorer Forum? [This message has been edited by Lakewalker (edited 04-22-2001).] |
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sleepymoongirl Member
since 2001-04-19
Posts 157bc canada |
awwwwwwwwww dude man that was like awesome. we lovez ya too. i haven't been here long and i can already see what ur saying. we is likes a poetry family yay for the dancing baby (i'm weird i know but i'm me what can i say...     |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Jason...! He forgot me..... What are you trying to say????  "I've come too close to happiness, to have it swept away,don't think I can take the pain, never fall again..." Janet |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
He forgot you????? well then............ I guess your not important. lol JK. Shame on you Low man's Lyric. tisk tisk *ego takes over* But you included m e and that is what is most important *grabs glow sticks, turns off lights, and a DJ begins to spin* WAAHOO.. It's a rave [This message has been edited by IsGona (edited 04-22-2001).] |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Hey! I heard there was a good poem here dedicated to the PiP Teens...this is great! We're glad you found your way to our little 'blue heaven'!  |
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Acies
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
blue is pretty. There is pleasure in poetic pains which only poets know......~Unknown |
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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA |
::scratches head:: What's a diddy? - Cody - Living From Memories Living From Thoughts There Are Some Things In Live That Cannot Be Taught [This message has been edited by CwboyAtHeart (edited 04-22-2001).] |
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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
Hehe. :Grabs Allans glowstick and bops you guys over the head!: Just Kidding!!! Hehe *If the only place I can live my dreams is in my sleep, then I'll sleep forever!* |
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Suga_Baby Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 380Maine, USA |
CHYES!!! GLOWSTICKS! Sorry, man, I love those things *LOL* Anyways, this was such a cute poem! This place is definately everything you say it is, and WOW I missed it! "A dream is a wish your heart makes while you are fast asleep." |
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Low Man's Lyric Member
since 2001-04-03
Posts 236In a dream |
Ha ha you are all great, thanks for taking the time to read this. Give her two red roses, each with a note. The first note says "For the woman I love" and the second, "For my best friend." |
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lonely*soul Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 396east haddam (moodus) ct :) |
i luv it...lol...and so true!!! good job ***sways lighter*** *KiM* "i once asked my daddy, daddy, are we going to the moon, and he said, we cant get to the moon from where we are" ~ME (hehe this actully happened to me |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
lol dorks *points* but o wells i be one toos tiff *licks yalls just to bug u* “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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Dopey Dope
Moderator
Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
*wipes off the lick from his cheek and frowns* Cowboy....erm......a diddy....*points at a guitar and acts like he's playin and singing*....that's a diddy. |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Indeedy it's a diddy. Ah, the glowsticks are a hit. What a thrill. Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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Bishop Junior Member
since 2001-04-22
Posts 30Nottingham, England |
Brill mate. Keep it up! ^*Bishop*^ |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Awwwwww your such a cutie!!!!!! Thanks for adding me in during your response Such a cute poem!!! |
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Acies
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Ok guys, let's leave the chat in teen explorer for now "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Ok. Acire. Mr. Moderator... your wish=our command. LOL...  "I've come too close to happiness, to have it swept away,don't think I can take the pain, never fall again..." Janet [This message has been edited by Jenn Cirrincione (edited 04-23-2001).] |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Seems like a good idea Acire... um... I know your real name too... |
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princess^sarah Member
since 2001-01-12
Posts 131melbourne |
WHAT BOUT ME?????? *snifflez* |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Yes, Acire, that's an AWESEOME idea.    |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
awww acire..we're singing diddies ...and we've got glowsticks *points to IsGona*..see?? and i'm having so much fun singing about flag boys.... ..hehehe dopey YOU'RE the crazy one!oh well gottsa to fallow dem rules right?? "Life is not long and boring, it's short and compelling." -Javier Agosto- [This message has been edited by cherish (edited 04-24-2001).] |
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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
You guys are so weird!! WEll, Im weird too, but... [This message has been edited by Heavens Tears (edited 04-24-2001).] |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
This is very nice...I think everyone that finds Passions feels at home...... SEA |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.... ......i'm the weirdest weirdo in this whole PASSIONS..so there!!...or am i not..? ...?death is not the greatest loss in life. the greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live. -norman cousins [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 04-24-2001).] |
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