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knightlyshadows
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0 posted 2001-04-19 09:39 PM


sitting here...
crying...
thinking..

why do i let her hurt me...?
why do i let her get to me...?
why do i let her control me...?

i know she does not see
i know she does not care
i know she does not understand

she is my sister
she is my friend
she is my enemy
i just now wrote this. my sister and i got in a fight. so its just a jumble of thoughts and makes no sense probably. dont bother saying anything unless you want too. this is just a release from frustration.

© Copyright 2001 Tiffany Durham - All Rights Reserved
knightlyshadows
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1 posted 2001-04-19 10:02 PM


ok im just mad now!!!!!!!

SHE IS EATING MY POPCORN!!!!!!!!!
arg arg arg arg arg

knightlyshadows
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2 posted 2001-04-19 10:06 PM


ok i sounded like a 2 year old in that reply lol so please over look it! ty tiff
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3 posted 2001-04-19 10:14 PM


Just don't hit her, she might bleed and then you'll get grounded from the puter...I'm speaking from experience here. Way to vent!  
  ~Carly

There is pleasure in poetic pains which only poets know......~Unknown

Godsend_1
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4 posted 2001-04-19 11:16 PM


ok baby wut we need to do is get aplan and attack at night when she wont expect it ok and we can sneak around the back and through the window and then when we right on top of her we strike ......*shakes head* whoa i need to stop it with the movies    i love you baby you are my life *hugs*

cherish
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5 posted 2001-04-19 11:33 PM


hehehehe..i know EXACTLY how you feel..hehehhee...good poem

"Life is not long and boring,
it's short and compelling." -Javier Agosto-

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6 posted 2001-04-20 02:21 AM


Nicely done.....I'll go with the plan...hehe.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

5_sweet_kisses
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7 posted 2001-04-20 11:13 AM


lol!! Tiff you nut.. its ok.. I get in fights with my neices and nephews.. Ben hun.. your plan was a lil weird but it was cool..TIff girl.. that was good. (what we could do is hog tie her but then you'll prolly get in troubel for that)(stupid thoughts) anyway... that was good tiff *licks tiff* :P Slurp..
knightlyshadows
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8 posted 2001-04-20 11:17 AM


*licks edith* slurp:P

lol i like the hog tyin cuz hey i be from alabama after all.......but lol i think i should just take her snipe huntin!!! lol yea thats would be great...if u dont know wut that is lol just ask! tiff  

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9 posted 2001-05-07 09:09 PM


Even the closest of friends and family argue.  This only shows us that we are all different people.  Just be patient.  Hope things are better

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee."  W.S.

knightlyshadows
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10 posted 2001-05-07 09:15 PM


lol yea tis lots betters cuz shes gones back home nows lol!!!!!!!!!!! woo hoos lol
tiff

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

U in the dark u in the pain u on the run
Living a hell living ur ghost living ur hell

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