Odd natured things - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

ethel lahootie
Member

since 2001-03-06

Posts 143
SC, USA

0 posted 2001-04-19 08:59 PM

~i jus wanna say thanks to bel who gave me the "title"

hehe! and yall mite not understand...but hey! owel! have fun~

Odd Natured Things

Odd natured things
Don’t happen often
Maybe only once…
In a blue moon
It was strange seeing you
And everyone else
Standing around
With only the voices
They were the voices
Of people I had already known
Yet something was different
The setting, the tone
Left only to see
For a few rushing moments
And wanting more
Of what I can’t have
Maybe in a month, a year…
Or even a lifetime
Another blue moon
Will shine from above
And grace me with a presence
That is so strange to mind
I cannot yet grasp
Everything that has happened
Yet maybe, just maybe
I’ll see a blue moon,
And wish upon it
For it to once more bring me you

~sorry if the format sux...if i even have one. it was a spur of the moment thing~

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

1 posted 2001-04-19 09:11 PM

hey ethel.

well i must say that at first it went right over the top of my head..*whooosh*..but the ending clarified heaps!..i liked this poem in that its just what you WANT to say not what you're TRYING to say...hang on does that make any sense??..hehehehe...good post.

"Life is not long and boring,
it's short and compelling." -Javier Agosto-

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

2 posted 2001-04-19 09:20 PM

intertesting poem.i thought it was a nice write.good job..keep writing

...?

[This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 04-19-2001).]

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-04-20 01:44 AM

Nice quote cherish, where'd you get it from?
hehehe......well i liked the poem. very well done.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

4 posted 2001-04-20 01:08 PM

A very interesting poem, Ethel. I didn't understand parts of it, but I still thought it is very well written. Nice job.

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

Acies

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

5 posted 2001-04-20 03:45 PM

interesting poem...hmmmmmm.........
I'll get back to you on this one

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

ethel lahootie
Member

since 2001-03-06

Posts 143
SC, USA

6 posted 2001-04-20 03:46 PM

thanks for replyin

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

7 posted 2001-04-20 08:05 PM

Great job. I did like the idea of a "blue moon," I thought it was original.

~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.
~Unknown

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.