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Spine Grinder
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Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2001-04-19 05:15 PM



With a hope that never falls,
She tries her hardest at everything.
Including love.
Her love for him was as deep as,
The deepest river.
He loved her but never said so.
The three little words that mean the most,
He just couldn't say.
This became a problem for her.
She thought he didn't love her,
She broke the chain of love that was between them.
Thier love to never be.

© Copyright 2001 Staci Weidner - All Rights Reserved
Allan Riverwood
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1 posted 2001-04-19 05:38 PM


What a sad story... if it's about you, I certainly hope all becomes well soon enough, and you are back on your feet and grinding spines again as soon as possible.  
~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day.  Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.  
~Unknown

Deranger
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2 posted 2001-04-19 06:34 PM


Hey, your skull has glowing green eyes too!

Written straight from the stream of consciousness, a very honest style.  

If this is about you, i hope you learned your lesson...about silence, that is..

Spreading insanity, one post at a time

My skull has glowing green eyes!

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3 posted 2001-04-19 07:07 PM


Nicely done....very well written

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Angel Bee
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4 posted 2001-04-19 07:56 PM


this was sad but sweet i enjoyed it, keep writing. :o)
~AB~

*~Sometimes just holding hands is holding on to everything.~*

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5 posted 2001-04-20 12:08 PM


A really sad situation.  Didn't he make you feel loved?  I personally think this is better than someone telling me the 3 words but don't show it thru actions.  Hope things get better

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee."  W.S.

Starr
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6 posted 2001-04-20 03:43 PM


This is really sad...If this happened to you then I'm truly sorry... Well written. Keep posting!

Every action of our lives touches some chord that will vibrate in eternity.

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7 posted 2001-04-22 11:27 AM


This was so sad!!!!!!! Nicely written tho!! very emotional i liked it  
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