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knightlyshadows
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 791
obscured vision

0 posted 2001-04-18 11:37 PM

A broken chain of endless time
Caught in a hidden web
Looking for a loop hole...
trying to escape...
continously circling...
constantly changing paths...
hoping for an exit...
but tricking your own mind...
thinking you have made it...
and then you hit the wall
of this broken chain of endless time
caught in a hidden web

LoneWolf
Member

since 2001-03-10

Posts 384
IL

1 posted 2001-04-18 11:50 PM

Hey i liked this one alot too. i know that feeling of being lost all to well. well hope to see more soon

It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that.

I've learned that even when you

Hand Me Down
Junior Member

since 2001-04-08

Posts 32
WV

2 posted 2001-04-19 01:33 AM

I think we all know the feeling of being lost, and I think we all know the answer to be found, but i dont need to do any preaching right now. LoL, ne way awsome poem.

"Cause I can't fix something this complex anymore than I can build a rose"

lonely*soul
Member

since 2001-04-05

Posts 396
east haddam (moodus) ct :)

3 posted 2001-04-19 08:13 AM

i liked this one alot...and yup..i know the feeling of being lost too, NEways great read!
*~kImMiE*

" im surrounded by people, but yet im still all alone"

Heavens Tears

Senior Member

since 2001-03-15

Posts 677

4 posted 2001-04-19 09:07 AM

I loved this one! It was very visual. Keep up the great work!

*If the only place I can live my dreams is in my sleep, then I'll sleep forever!*

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

5 posted 2001-04-19 09:28 AM

Very nicely done, knighly! I enjoyed this one a lot.. it's got a very nice flow, and, although it's short, it's powerful.
Nice job.

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

6 posted 2001-04-19 02:29 PM

Amazing. Very good poem. I enjoyed it. You write quite well.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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