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Angel Bee
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0 posted 2001-04-18 10:06 PM


Because you were there

you stood by me and i stood strong
you wiped away my tears that had been there for so long
you came in and gave me a new start
now you've got it, you've got my heart
i give thanks to God for sending you to me
you've helped me be all that i can be
you've given me your love and your care
thank you for always being there

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1 posted 2001-04-18 10:13 PM


Seems like someone's just fallen  
he he he
Seriously, nice to see people in pip, happy
thanks for sharing
loved the poem

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee."  W.S.

fozzyozzy
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2 posted 2001-04-18 10:34 PM


It's nice to see the smiles of the day.  Nice dedication to whoever it is.

"The heart can think of no devotion
Greater than being shore to ocean
Holding the curve of one position
Counting an endless repetition"
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3 posted 2001-04-18 10:57 PM


Nice..i like this nice rhyme to it and a beautifyl style.

The person i loved the most has left me, now all i got are u guys here. Thanks for the support.
*Tears of love*
*Tears of faith*
*Never any Tears

Hand Me Down
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4 posted 2001-04-19 01:36 AM


Really, really, liked this and I hope to see some more awsome works soon

"Cause I can't fix something this complex anymore than I can build a rose"

lonely*soul
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5 posted 2001-04-19 08:02 AM


i like i like...very cute..and im sure whoever ya wrote it for is awsome...(obviously)  good read!

       ~*KiMmIe*~

" im surrounded by people, but yet im still all alone"

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6 posted 2001-04-19 09:21 AM


Awww.  I really enjoyed this one.  Keep it up.  

*If the only place I can live my dreams is in my sleep, then I'll sleep forever!*

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7 posted 2001-04-19 09:24 AM


This is very sweet.  I enjoyed reading it a lot.  It's a nice tribute to your friend.
Nicely done.

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

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8 posted 2001-04-19 02:28 PM


awww sweet. Good luck with everything!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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