Teen Poetry #4 |
Because you were there |
Angel Bee Member
since 2001-01-30
Posts 176Virginia |
Because you were there you stood by me and i stood strong you wiped away my tears that had been there for so long you came in and gave me a new start now you've got it, you've got my heart i give thanks to God for sending you to me you've helped me be all that i can be you've given me your love and your care thank you for always being there |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Seems like someone's just fallen he he he Seriously, nice to see people in pip, happy thanks for sharing loved the poem "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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fozzyozzy Member
since 2001-03-15
Posts 336Lessburg Virginia |
It's nice to see the smiles of the day. Nice dedication to whoever it is. "The heart can think of no devotion |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
Nice..i like this nice rhyme to it and a beautifyl style. The person i loved the most has left me, now all i got are u guys here. Thanks for the support. |
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Hand Me Down Junior Member
since 2001-04-08
Posts 32WV |
Really, really, liked this and I hope to see some more awsome works soon "Cause I can't fix something this complex anymore than I can build a rose" |
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lonely*soul Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 396east haddam (moodus) ct :) |
i like i like...very cute..and im sure whoever ya wrote it for is awsome...(obviously) good read! ~*KiMmIe*~ " im surrounded by people, but yet im still all alone" |
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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
Awww. I really enjoyed this one. Keep it up. *If the only place I can live my dreams is in my sleep, then I'll sleep forever!* |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
This is very sweet. I enjoyed reading it a lot. It's a nice tribute to your friend. Nicely done. --Marie subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
awww sweet. Good luck with everything! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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