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Jess714
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0 posted 2001-04-18 06:18 PM


O' Small one, you are a light
Able to turn on
When we want you to fight
O'Small one, you are bright
Able to be smart
When you want to be smart
O' Small One, you can be dark
Don't get on your black side
Don't want to see that witch in you
O'Small one, you can fade
When you are tired and weak
Quiet when you fall alseep

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Rach813
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1 posted 2001-04-18 06:23 PM


Sis this is such a great poem to describe Becca! Fits her great and you write great poems! Keep up the good work and always remember I love you!
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2 posted 2001-04-18 06:35 PM


This poem put a big smile in my face  
thanks for sharing

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee."  W.S.

Angel Bee
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3 posted 2001-04-18 07:28 PM


this is cute, keep writing :o)
~AB~

*~Sometimes just holding hands is holding on to everything.~*

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4 posted 2001-04-18 09:37 PM


Oh don't we just love those little creatures...er....angels...Heh...very sweet poem.  
  ~Carly

There is pleasure in poetic pains which only poets know......~Unknown

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5 posted 2001-04-19 03:03 AM


Awwww i wish I had a little sis......i'd have someone to beat on....
hehe jk
Beautiful poem

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

knightlyshadows
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6 posted 2001-04-19 08:25 AM


lol very nicely put and very sweetish! i only have an older sis but im gettin' a younger step sis soon *is scared* so ill prolly learn just how u feel pretty quickly! thanx muchs, ~*'TifF'*~
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7 posted 2001-04-19 09:06 AM


That is sweet.  I'm the youngest, how come I never get a poem written about me?  Oh wait, thats cuz my siblings arent poets!  I dont know you sister, but that poem is really cute.

*If the only place I can live my dreams is in my sleep, then I'll sleep forever!*

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8 posted 2001-04-19 09:30 AM


This is very sweet, Jess.  I think it's a very beautiful tribute to your little sister  
Nicely done.

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

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