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Just an ordianry day
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Just an ordianry day |
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Angel Bee Member
since 2001-01-30
Posts 176Virginia |
Just an ordinary day I get up every morning and begin my daily routine I prepare myself for my day as an average teen I get my school books and await my ride Then its off to school for another day inside I walk into school and go talk to my buddies Then the bell will ring and its off to my studies I anxiously await the time until I see you The bell sounds and I take a quick view There you are as usual waiting for me We walk down the hall like queen and king bee We are the cutest couple as some say Seeing you just makes my day Never a fight have we had You've met the approval of everyone, even my dad We reach the end of the hall, we hug and go our sperate ways Just to go on to class on just another ordinary day |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
WHAM The best I've read today so simple, but it defenitely tells your story AWESOME ~*stands up and applauds*~ "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
You could revel for hours in the beauty of an ordinary day... At sometime in the day, we should all appreciate the spledor of another day we walk upon this indelible shpere of molten emotion and liquid dreams... Got a little carried away...eh? Anywho, i really like this...cheers! Spreading insanity, one post at a time |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I enjoyed this. This is definately the typical day for a happy couple in highschool. Nicely expressed!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
sometimes it's hard to appreciate average days, and it's always good to have someone who brightens those days and makes them great. you did a great job with this, keep posting your work. Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
I'll agree with Ban on this one. It's always nice to have that special person who makes you smile  Very nicely done. --Marie subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart. |
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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
Great poem. I'm glad you have found that someone to make your day brighter.  *If the only place I can live my dreams is in my sleep, then I'll sleep forever!* |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
aww that was lovely!!! gawwsh i miss high skool lol  <~~~ is doin them right  *is proud* sowwy i get smilie happy sometimes lol |
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