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princess^sarah
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0 posted 2001-04-18 01:40 AM


You are the sunshine in my life
you are the twinkle in my eyes
you are the sparkles on my body
you are the smile on my lips.

you have a hand
a hand i want to hold
you have lips
lips that i want to kiss
you have a heart
a very sweet caring heart.

i have a heart too,
which i give to you.....

this poem is for anonomous albert!!
i hope u like it alb!!!

© Copyright 2001 sarah alford - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-04-18 01:54 AM


hehe.... thanks

       
         i loved it!!

                        

thanks sarah!! i   also

princess^sarah
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2 posted 2001-04-18 01:58 AM


*kisses your cheek softly making you blush*!
tehe your welcome!

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3 posted 2001-04-18 03:11 AM


Hmmmmmmm are you  two together?

Well great tribute to albert....awwww so sweet  

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

princess^sarah
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4 posted 2001-04-18 03:21 AM


LOL no where not
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5 posted 2001-04-18 03:34 AM


hehe....
no... wait what r u talkin bout ?
...of course not

[This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 04-18-2001).]

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6 posted 2001-04-18 12:09 PM


This was really sweet and definetely a piece that anyone would love to have written for them.  keep posting all your work.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

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7 posted 2001-04-18 05:46 PM


I'm lost here...Albert, you from Australia too?  Are you both dating?

well, the poem was really sweet Sarah
I think Dopey wants a kiss too  

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee."  W.S.

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8 posted 2001-04-19 10:30 AM


Aww.. very sweet poem.. my first impression was are you 2 together?  
Beautiful poem!  ANd a great tribute  

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

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9 posted 2001-04-19 11:51 AM


Hee hee... I said it from day one, just ask AF.  
"Sarah and Albert, those two were made for each other."  
Guess who was right, as usual.  
~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day.  Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.  
~Unknown

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10 posted 2001-04-22 05:46 PM


*Sarah and Albert sitting in a tree...*
This was cuuuuttttte.  

"I've come too close to happiness, to have it swept away,don't think I can take the pain, never fall again..." Janet

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11 posted 2001-04-30 01:02 PM


this personally deserves to me on page one

hehe......byeee

...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

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12 posted 2001-04-30 01:05 PM


OH MY GOD!! Allan, Allan!! You were right!!   wooo he can predict the future now! lol

ahem..now on a serious note. Sarah, you're just too sweet. Keep 'em coming chicky.  

~AF~

" Your mother's in here with us Karras. Would you like to leave a message? I'll see that she gets it."
The Devil - The Exorcist

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13 posted 2001-04-30 01:10 PM


*clears throat*
.
.
.LOL! ...

...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

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