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fozzyozzy Member
since 2001-03-15
Posts 336Lessburg Virginia 
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My Papers Don't let your mind take hold o' me I've had all mine eyes can see "No more!" screamed the mighty empty soul A shriek bid for a cry to see an empty mouth From its gaping hole Sigh with a whisper as in a story Home is so far from a witness of truth Lies to see that I wrote "you are sorry" Lost in what I thought of as blessed harmony I bleed with my heart only love with no translation Save my hands comforting travelling inspiration Come in, make a stay upon my abode A pearly white paper beside the road Why was it there to attract His attention Papyrus on a road with no destination We let it float dancing phantoms come before us Too young to ponder a dancing paper dancing into The night time forest. "The heart can think of no devotion |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
"Home is so far from a witness of truth" <-- That's my favorite line. Very beautiful thoughts, fozzy. I like this poem a lot.. one of my favs from you thus far. Nice job! --Marie subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I liked this fozzy. Very well written!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
wow, nice job on this, the wording in this poem is beautiful. keep posting all your work. Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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Kicking Kim Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 426Cloud Cucko Land! |
"Papyrus on a road with no destination" I like this line, its always good to add antique words to capture the true beauty of poetry! I liked this one and hope to see more of your work! ^*~Kicking Kim~*^ "Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression" [This message has been edited by Kicking Kim (edited 04-21-2001).] |
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Linc
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
Hey, WOW!!! Great poem this is wonderful I loved it keep them comeing. Until your next poem -- Linc "Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment." |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
This was outstanding! I really enjoyed it Ozz... what an awesome poem! One of your best so far, I'd have to say!  ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
great poem... i liked this a lot keep writing fozz  ...?death is not the greatest loss in life. the greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live. -norman cousins |
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