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Dark Enchantress
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0 posted 2001-04-17 07:26 PM


How can you kiss this girl?
How can you want this girl?
I wish you'd rape this girl
We'd poison each other
Dare me again

Looking into her eyes
I nearly began to cry
I saw the pain and desolation
of her weary soul,
trying so hard to hang onto
whatever was once there...

Turning away from the mirror
I felt the emptiness closing in
Crushing my body
and strangling my heart
Turning another page
Where was my catcher...?

I heard a thousand voices
cry out and moan in agony
all at once as I lingered
Taking another hard blow
Tell me what thrives here?

Always throwing fists,
little angry girl
Why don't you grow up?

I can't even explain
my levels of confusion
and destruction
These words seem pointless
to search for in my soul
And so ends this poem

So ends it all...

"...if you want love you must be love.."
Billy Corgan, Smashing Pumpkins

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Dark Enchantress
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1 posted 2001-04-17 07:28 PM


I'm not going to be posting for a while...at all. I have some things to take care of and I don't wish to share anymore until I do. I'll still be online though if anyone wishes to talk to me.  

"...if you want love you must be love.."
Billy Corgan, Smashing Pumpkins

banburycross
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since 2001-03-27
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viginia
2 posted 2001-04-17 07:51 PM


I'm sorry to heaer that you won't be posting for a while, i really enjoy reading all your work.  i really liked this one too, the emotion is great and the images are beautiful.  i hope i get to read more in the not-too-distant future.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

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3 posted 2001-04-17 10:52 PM


The line about you wishing for this one girl to be raped freaked me out. I hope all gets better for you *hugs*

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Dark Enchantress
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4 posted 2001-04-18 12:13 PM


The girl is me, Javier. I would never wish that on someone else...thanks for the hugs.  

"...if you want love you must be love.."
Billy Corgan, Smashing Pumpkins

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