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Heavens Tears

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since 2001-03-15

Posts 677

0 posted 2001-04-17 02:56 PM

My tearstained pillow
One things they'll never take away
On which I have mumbled
Words of love
Words of hate
Words of pain
On which I have dreamt
Of happiness
Of peace
Of an escape
That I have hid under
And wept silent tears
And admitted all my sins
And begged to be free
From this Hell called my life

*If the only place I can live my dreams is in my sleep, then I'll sleep forever!*

[This message has been edited by Heavens Tears (edited 04-17-2001).]

keoni
Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 850
Up in the mountains in the NFC

1 posted 2001-04-17 06:52 PM

I liked this. Makes you totally look at that plain pillow in a whole new perspective. I hope everything is going OK in life for you cause you didn't sound too happy.
Jon

"Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine
"Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur

Sabriel.s.h.lover
Member

since 2001-04-16

Posts 73
b.f.e. aka- Hickville

2 posted 2001-04-17 07:04 PM

If this is a true statement then I've felt this way before. Nicely said. I liked this .
Sabriel

Ina
Senior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

3 posted 2001-04-17 07:06 PM

jon your not a plain pillow....your a (blank) pillow....haha

This was great. showed true feelings. Awesome dude!

a small cut is only the beggining of a life in pain

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

4 posted 2001-04-17 09:59 PM

This is a very sad poem. *hugs* I'm sorry that times are trying for you. I hope things get better.
This is a very well written poem, and a joy to read. Thanks for sharing.
Keep writing about it.. it helps.

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2001-04-17 11:20 PM

Very sad poem. I enjoyed it but hope you get better!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

DancinQueen

Senior Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA

6 posted 2001-04-17 11:27 PM

OH i absolutly LOVE the title

THe poem was just as wonderful, too. Keep up the great work, im anxious to read more!

*dq

-=We often get hurt when we trust someone we want them to be instead of who they really are=-

lonely*soul
Member

since 2001-04-05

Posts 396
east haddam (moodus) ct :)

7 posted 2001-04-17 11:30 PM

i actully like this alot!!! when i read it i pictured me in my bed holding the pillow to my face and kicking my feet (wow i know the image too well) but i hope everything is ok...
<3 ~*KiM*~

" im surrounded by people, but yet im still all alone"

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