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Attack Ferrit Junior Member
since 2001-04-09
Posts 41texas |
binary programming i am you broken heart i am your mid-day crush i am wrapped insane i am cellophane i’m the carbon copy copper wire in your brain i am the one i am the zero kill the rebel kill the hero phobia addict disconnected mechanically resurrected i am the setting sun i am the power cord i am the coming plague i am blank and vague i’m the real deal cop a feel fake bootleg i am the one i am the zero kill the rebel kill the hero all lines are currently down we’re under going upgrades all lines are currently down it’s more efficient that way all lines are currently down and we’re feeling fine f-f-f-feeling fine f-f-f-feeling fine everything is skin deep |
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Linc
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
Hey, Haha this is a COOL poem!!!! Maybe a little crazy but never the less liked the style. Until your next poem -- Linc "Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment." |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
I hope you don't mind, but I sang this REALLY loud. Haha, great job on this....Loved it loved it.  ~Carly There are pleasures in poetic pains that only poets know......~Unknown |
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Sabriel.s.h.lover Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 73b.f.e. aka- Hickville |
This poem ROCKED! it is going in my library. Nice job. sabreil |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Ditto.  "...if you want love you must be love.." |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
wow, i really like the format of this, definetely very cool. i enjoyed this a lot, keep posting your work Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This song rocked!!! The ending was hilarious....it's funny cuz i've heard professionals sing that and to see it in lyrical form is GREAT but funny. I love writing songs, I think you have it pretty much down. If this is a poem, well done, but I like to think it's a song....hehe. GREAT!!!!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
Well, i must admitt, i really love your name...Attack Ferrit...how original..yet, somehow disturbing... Anywho, unique approach to--wait, what exactly are you talking about? Spreading insanity, one post at a time |
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