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Kosetsu
Member

since 2001-03-10

Posts 450
Alabama, USA

0 posted 2001-04-16 10:20 PM

The first page has turned,
The war begins,
The first lesson was learned,
Time for the second.

The second page has turned,
The war rages,
Students of war, how we yearned,
For our time to kill.

The third page is turning,
The war fading,
Lessons lost, now re-learning,
Students of war are gone.

It can't be!
He exists..
Master of the Oceans!
It's..
Leviathan...

Low Man's Lyric
Member

since 2001-04-03

Posts 236
In a dream

1 posted 2001-04-16 10:45 PM

Its painful to see young ones die. Good poem.

Give her two red roses, each with a note. The first note says "For the woman I love" and the second, "For my best friend."
~Anonymous

Marshalzu

Member Elite

since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

2 posted 2001-04-17 09:19 AM

Very good, I liked your format... Keep on posting.
<<_ Andrew _>>

" No Army can conquer a galaxy, yet faith alone can overturn the universe."

E-mail/Msn: Targetmrzu@hotmail.com

Kicking Kim
Member

since 2001-04-16

Posts 426
Cloud Cucko Land!

3 posted 2001-04-17 11:10 AM

"How we yearned
for our time to kill"

This is quite an interesting line because it shows me 2 meanings. Their time to kill and help their country win the war but also time to kill the war, making the world peaceful. Keep up the good work I thoroughlry enjoyed this poem!!

Truly appreciative
^*~Kicking Kim~*^

Linc

Senior Member

since 2001-03-07

Posts 552
The Backstreet Boy

4 posted 2001-04-17 12:15 PM

Hey,

I like this poem, its a great poem and powerful. Until your next poem

-- Linc

"Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment."

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2001-04-17 09:32 PM

Great poem kosetsu!!! I liked it. Very good message within the poem.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Dana Samples
Member

since 2001-04-07

Posts 68

6 posted 2001-04-17 09:37 PM

Hey this one is great just like the rest of yours. i loved how you got your point across with only 3 stanzas. that is really good. keep up the great writing hun!!!

lots of love, dana

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