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One Last Cry...
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One Last Cry... |
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Hallucination Member
since 2001-03-18
Posts 419 |
I'm down and waiting for you trying to get my feelings throught but you should know that I am blue and my love for you is true please wipe these tears from my eyes so that I can find another love I'm gonna cry cause you left me all behind I can't get you outter my mind I'm gonna try to stop living a lie I guess I'm down to one last cry I know I'm down to one last cry I know I have to be strong lay the past all behind cause life goes on and on and on untill the end so wipe these tears from my eyes so I can get on with my life I'm gonna cry cause you left me all behind I can't get you outter my mind I'm gonna try to stop living a lie I guess I'm down to one last cry I know I'm down to one last cry From the first day I made alot of mistakes I can't even see you face to face girl and know you're gone, for good girl I could never do you wrong I'm gonna cry cause you left me all behind I can't get you outter my mind I'm gonna try to stop living a lie I guess I'm down to one last cry I know I'm down to one last cry |
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Linc
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
Hey, Sad...This was a well written poem I enjoyed reading it. Until your next masterpeice -- Linc "Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment." |
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~sugarpie313~ Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 375Maine, USA |
i love this! i can soooo relate to it. wonderful. brilliant. i love all your work. keep it up *L* Valerie *Life can take your dreams and turn them upside down, Friends will talk about you when you're not around, but don't ever lose that light in your eyes* |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
I think that you expressed your emotions very well in this poem...it actually brings back old memories of mine and it's kind of depressing me now. THANKS A LOT!!! lol..I'm kidding.  Very sad and also very beautifully written...I enjoyed this a lot. "...if you want love you must be love.." Billy Corgan, Smashing Pumpkins [This message has been edited by Dark Enchantress (edited 04-16-2001).] |
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katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
this is so sad. hey cheer up! really well done!! ~kate 'Love starts with a smile, grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear.' |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Very sad poem. I liked it.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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