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Angel Bee
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0 posted 2001-04-16 07:40 PM


thanks for always sticking with me
and thanks for everything you've helped me be
thanks for believing in me in everything i do
thanks so much for just  being you
my only regret is being with you so late
you've been the best, the perfect "mate"
so thanks for never leaving me in the dark
so my gift to you is my heart

*~Sometimes just holding hands is holding on to everything.~*

© Copyright 2001 Angel Bee - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-04-16 10:59 PM


Very sweet poem you have written, Angel Bee.   I love your quote too. So true...

"...if you want love you must be love.."
Billy Corgan, Smashing Pumpkins

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2 posted 2001-04-16 11:19 PM


Very sweet, Angel!  Beautiful tribute to someone who is obviously very special to you  

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

katherine
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3 posted 2001-04-17 07:38 AM


this is so absolutly sweet!you're luckey to have found them. make sure they take care of that heart.
keep it up
~kate

'Love starts with a smile, grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear.'

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4 posted 2001-04-17 12:38 PM


Hey,

     Short and sweet just the way I like them   great poem. Unil your next poem

      -- Linc

"Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment."

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5 posted 2001-04-17 01:31 PM


Awww such a sweet poem!! your very lucky to have someone like this!! never let them go  
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6 posted 2001-04-17 09:41 PM


Awwwwwww this is so sweet. Very enjoyable read!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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7 posted 2001-04-17 09:41 PM


Sorry! Double post......so I'll just dance for all of you *dances a little bit* Yea I won't go overboard this time. People don't like my dancing  


I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

[This message has been edited by Dopey_Dope (edited 04-17-2001).]

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8 posted 2001-04-18 05:31 PM


This on of those poems that I wish was about me    This is very good Angelbee.  i hope you do share more, and actually get to know some of the other members of the forum thru like aim or icq ~*hint hint*~  

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee."  W.S.

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