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0 posted 2001-04-16 04:51 PM


My heart is a fickle master.

My heart is a fickle master,
Flirts with love every other day,
And so I end up in disaster,
It’s just some little game I play.

I wish that I could hold you, I’m feeling insecure,
I was trying to hold out for love I know it’s you I’m sure,

Dazzled by your beauty,
Overcome by your grace,
Forgetting I have a duty,
I end up in this disgrace.

I wish that I could hold you, I’m feeling insecure,
I was trying to hold out for love I know it’s you I’m sure,

I’m reaching out for glory,
Can’t accept this fate,
I’m rewriting my own story,
I’m creating my self hate.

I wish that I could hold you, I’m feeling insecure,
I was trying to hold out for love I know it’s you I’m sure,

Betraying all your faith in me,
Cheating I know it’s wrong,
But I’m not in love you see,
And I’ve known that far too long,

I wish that I could hold you, I’m feeling insecure,
I was trying to hold out for love I know it’s you I’m sure,

I realise I was in love with you,
It’s all those things I miss,
I should stuck you like glue,
But I ruined it for a kiss.

I wish that I could hold you, I’m feeling insecure,
I was trying to hold out for love I know it’s you I’m sure,

<<_  Andrew _>>

" No Army can conquer a galaxy, yet faith alone can overturn the universe."

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1 posted 2001-04-16 06:30 PM


This was great! I REALLY liked this poem man! VERY VERY good. You wrote it well.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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2 posted 2001-04-16 08:02 PM


It seems like today you've been trying out a few different styles and formats.  I really like this poem.  The format is GREAT.  Very nicely done  

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

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3 posted 2001-04-16 09:10 PM


Hey,

         GREAT POEM!!! this was a wonderful poem, I liked the style   keep em' coming

         -- Linc

"Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment."

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4 posted 2001-04-16 11:03 PM


Yeah!!! What they said...  
I enjoyed this one very much.

"...if you want love you must be love.."
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