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princess^sarah
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0 posted 2001-04-16 03:48 AM


I'm angry inside
I feel lots of hurt
It all went so quick
Why did it hurt

He left me right after
I then felt ashamed
I felt it was my fault
I took the blame

He left me right after
He felt a relief
He now had hurt me
And was unable to thin
Those feelings of hurt
My feelings inside
The pride taken away
The unhappiness inside

But now I must forget
Try not to think
What has happened is over
My pain is in sink



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1 posted 2001-04-16 03:51 AM


if u really did go thru this....i'm really sorry... hope thing get better 4 u and ur heart...the poem itself had much pain in it...
katherine
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2 posted 2001-04-16 07:46 AM


this is horrible. Not the way it's written!!!
did you go through it? i hope not if you did i hope you're ok!

feel better
~kate

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3 posted 2001-04-16 11:21 AM


Hey,

        If you really did go thorough this I am really sorry. I know that wont help and I wish I could say its going to be "okay" but thats up to you. I hope you stay strong and relize its not your fault. Back to the poem itself it was well done I liked it alot   Until your next poem

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4 posted 2001-04-16 11:28 AM


This is a very well written poem.  It's full of pain and emotion... If this really did happen to you, I am so sorry.  No one deserves to go through something like that.  It's horrible... *Hugs* I hope everything will be okay.


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subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

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5 posted 2001-04-16 03:55 PM


Wow this is powerful in the sense that this is some serious stuff. I hope to God this didn't happen to you. You ok?
I hope so....


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