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I miss Love
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I miss Love |
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Jenabou Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 215Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA 
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I miss love and all the happiness it brought i miss the nights i couldnt sleep because my mind was filled of loveing thoughts and the way the air always smelled sweeter everythings better when your in love I miss that feeling in my heart when i felt safe I miss the smile on my face when i knew i was in the right place the way the world was perfect through the eyes of a helpless lover I miss what you have now with someone else I miss the feelings we once shared and how amazing it felt the way the sun always shown on me now im only living in the shadows The world is like a mirror; frown at it, and it frowns at you. Smile and it smiles, too |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Ah man... this is sad.  Well keep on living, someday you'll love again. 'Tis better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all, you know...  ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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lonely*soul Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 396east haddam (moodus) ct :) |
wow..now tha u mention it, i miss that a lil bit too...but dont cry b.c its gone, smile b.c it happended" (even tho that doeast totally fit in,...its still a cute quote lol) <3 *KiM* " im surrounded by people, but yet im still all alone" |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Aww, this is sad. The poem was very well written. I haven't seen you posting much, so I look forward to reading more. Nice job. --Marie subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Jenabou, Every line in this piece except two related to my life extremely well. Losing the one you love with every single bit of you hurts like crazy. Actually, this has made me really upset.  Thanks for the read though... ~AF~ " Your mother's in here with us Karras. Would you like to leave a message? I'll see that she gets it." |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Haven't seen you in a while. This was a sad poem. I liked it though. I hope things get ok for you.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
It's always horrible when a loving relationship ends, and you describe this feeling well. I hope sharing this helped you feel better. Best of luck!  "Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
I hope things get better, and i know that losing love is one of that hardest things that you ever have to go through. This is the first of your work that i've gotten to read, and it is very well written so keep posting your work. Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
Wonderful poem. You showed your emotions well. I havent read many of your poems, but I look forward to more. *If the only place I can live my dreams is in my sleep, then I'll sleep forever!* |
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