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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Lost in a sea of green-blue, Never to drown. Happiness grows, My hearts overwhelmed. Dazing and gazing, Taking my time. Forgetting my thoughts, Let my body unwind. Sweet sweet symphony, Playing to the beat of my heart. Breathing softly, In a fascinating art. I often loose my way, Always end up in this place. But i'd rather be here, Then the life i have to face. Thats one reason i love you, So much and so true. Cuz i can forever be enchanted, By your eyes of green-blue. [This message has been edited by xShUgArHiGhx (edited 04-15-2001).] |
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lonely*soul Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 396east haddam (moodus) ct :) |
wow that gave me a boost of positive energy lol...good job, and its a cute poem! <3 kim  " im surrounded by people, but yet im still all alone" |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Hee hee... *has eyes of green-blue* This is so sweeet. I like the format a lot. Great job on this one! ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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Attack Ferrit Junior Member
since 2001-04-09
Posts 41texas |
great poem, chock full of emotion, vitimans, and minerals. (sorry im in a random mood) really a great poem though. everything is skin deep |
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katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
this is really good! so sweet. ~kate 'Love starts with a smile, grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear.' |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
LOL.. vitamins and minerals? Heh. Very nice poem you've got here. I liked it a lot. It's a very positive outlook on things. Nicely done. --Marie subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Awww so sweet. I liked this shugar. Unfortunately I have light brown eyes with circles of green  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Great poem... I liked it loads. <<_Andrew_>> " No Army can conquer a galaxy, yet faith alone can overturn the universe." |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
great job!!! i liked it  ... i really did  |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
I am totally with you, girl! The guy has to have the beautiful eyes. I'm partial to blue eyes myself. It's easy to lose yourself in a pair of beautiful eyes... geez, I'm starting to sound like.. well, all of my poems!  Thanks for sharing.  "Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli |
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ethel lahootie Member
since 2001-03-06
Posts 143SC, USA |
this was really good...i liked it a LOT! ~JO~ |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Thank you everyone for your replies!!!! |
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