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Hallucination
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since 2001-03-18
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0 posted 2001-04-15 06:16 PM


Every time you walk past me
I get this feeling of sensuality
My heart begins to beat, faster and faster
And the words won’t come out
No matter how hard I try
There’s no answer to why….

I’m just crazy about you
and all the things you do
You make me lose track of time
make lose my mind.

I am laying awake every night
Cause I can’t forget your eyes
and I feel more alive, day by day
cause I know I’ll see you again
but no matter how hard I try
there’s still no answer to why…

I’m just crazy about you
and all the things you do
You make me lose track of time
make lose my mind.

as you walk past me you turn and smile
I’m losing control, you everything my heart desire
There’s no reason to try…cause
I have found the answer why….

I’m just crazy about you
and all the things you do
You make me lose track of time
make lose my mind.


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lonely*soul
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1 posted 2001-04-15 06:36 PM


hehe...wow, i sooo know this feeling, good job tho..i dont think ive seen any work by you before,since ive only been on here for a couple of weeks, keep writing and i hope i see some more of your work!!
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2 posted 2001-04-16 03:44 AM


Great job. I liked this one. Very sweet poem, not your best, but nonetheless a good read.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Spine Grinder
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since 2000-10-28
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3 posted 2001-04-16 11:38 AM


I sooo know this feeling. Nice poem.
*S*staci

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4 posted 2001-04-16 11:41 AM


This is so sweet!  It's not your best work, but it was nice to read.  Good job  

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

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