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Hallucination
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since 2001-03-18
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0 posted 2001-04-15 06:12 PM


No one can fill this empty space you left behind
I’ve got so many words inside, I wanna say to you
With every step I take, with every beat of my heart
I’ll think of you and the time we spend together

It’s tearing me apart, it’s breaking my heart
That I have to wait so long
to hold you in my arms to feel your warmth

I’m crying my heart out while reading your letter
Wondering if I should call you
Cause hearing you’re voice would make it so much better

Remember when we used to be close all the time
I’m drowning in tears inside, need you to save me
Every door that you close, I will open with my heart
For as long as I breathe the love we shared

It’s tearing me apart, it’s breaking my heart
That I have to wait so long
to hold you in my arms to feel your warmth

I’m crying my heart out while reading your letter
Wondering if I should call you
Cause hearing you’re voice would make it so much better

It’s tearing me apart, it’s breaking my heart
That I have to wait so long
to hold you in my arms to feel your warmth

I’m crying my heart out while reading your letter
Wondering if I should call you
Cause hearing you’re voice would make it so much better


© Copyright 2001 Brian Eggertsen - All Rights Reserved
lonely*soul
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east haddam (moodus) ct :)
1 posted 2001-04-15 06:54 PM


awww thats so sad, but its cool that you have somone that means that much...(funny tho, b.c alot of your other poems are about not having anyone if i member correctly  hehe)
    <3  *~KiM~*

" im surrounded by people, but yet im still all alone"

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2 posted 2001-04-16 03:38 PM


I liked this....thought you did well.

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3 posted 2001-04-16 03:51 PM


Well done... I liked this immensely. Keep on posting.
<<_Andrew_>>

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