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0 posted 2001-04-15 01:28 PM


There’s something about the glimpse in your eyes
That makes me feel so insecure
I’ll give up everything just to be with you tonight
This time I’m really sure
You’re the one I’ve been waiting for
I have to show that I’ll always be here
That you can put your trust in me

Girl if you lay down beside me, I’ll show you what love can do
I’ll give you the cloud, that every girl dreams of
Just close your eyes, and all your wishes will come true
Let me take you to a place, deep within my heart

Every time I wanna say something to you
The words comes out all wrong
If only I could say, if only you knew what I knew
We’ll be lovers in a song
And the bond between us where just so strong
I know there’s no time to hesitate
Cause then it would be to late

Girl if you lay down beside me, I’ll show you what love can do
I’ll give you the cloud, that every girl dreams of
Just close your eyes, and all your wishes will come true
Let me take you to a place, deep within my heart

Take my hand and I’ll show you the door
To love, a love you’ve never felt before
All you have to do is just lay down

Girl if you lay down beside me, I’ll show you what love can do
I’ll give you the cloud, that every girl dreams of
Just close your eyes, and all your wishes will come true
Let me take you to a place, deep within my heart


© Copyright 2001 Brian Eggertsen - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-04-15 02:19 PM


Good poem...and you're right...if you hesitate, soon it might be too late.

I had a dream once that I could fly and I laughed at everyone and kicked them in the back of the head because they couldn't fly too. :)

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2 posted 2001-04-15 06:43 PM


i like that poem...and your right~!!!  i think that one would even make a good song    good job!
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3 posted 2001-04-16 02:45 PM


Carpe Diem!!!

Good poem.....go get her

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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4 posted 2001-04-16 02:49 PM


Great poem, I wouldn't hesitate for one momement longer reach out and grab with two hands firmly and never let go.
Good Job keep posting.
Andrew.

" No Army can conquer a galaxy, yet faith alone can overturn the universe."

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