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princess^sarah Member
since 2001-01-12
Posts 131melbourne 
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The sky, the moon, the heavens above, There's nothing in this world that compares to your love. Gentle spring breezes and cold winter nights, You're kind and so special, the light of my life. Your sweet soft kisses and warm calming touch, All remind me of the night you told me I meant so much. Now days may seem endless and words torn in two, But nothing can hurt me because, I once loved you. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
beautifully written. its a great poem i loved it. hope this person knows how u feel for him... hope things get better..  [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 04-15-2001).] |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
This is sweet! Like Albert said, I hope this person knows that you feel this way towards him. Very nice poem. I enjoyed the read, as always. --Marie subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart. |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Great job on this poem, Sarah. It is very simple, and the format is quite admirable in its simplicity. You pulled it off nicely, it has a wonderful message to it and a great deal of emotion. I also really love the title. Excellently done!  ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Romantic...simple...meaningful...true... Very nice.  I had a dream once that I could fly and I laughed at everyone and kicked them in the back of the head because they couldn't fly too. :) |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
BEAUTIFUL |
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lonely*soul Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 396east haddam (moodus) ct :) |
awwwww sarah that is sooo cute, hopefully this person knows how you feel for them!!! <3 kim " im surrounded by people, but yet im still all alone" |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Great poem. You have improved so much throughout your time here. I enjoyed this greatly. I wish a girl would a poem like this for me....well cept for the fact that the relationship ended in this poem cuz the love is a memory and stuff.....but great job.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
*bump*...page one this was a beautiful poem...it deserves more reads...  ...?ahhhhh....i'm addicted to passions in poetry!!!!! |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
This was a great poem. I havent read much work by you but if its all like this I think Im gonna. Thanks for sharing it! "If you should die before me, ask if you could bring a friend." |
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