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I won't ever give you up
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I won't ever give you up |
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Hallucination Member
since 2001-03-18
Posts 419 |
Nights have turned, hours have passed, since the day I met you From the first time, that I kissed you, I felt something in my heart so true You make everyday better and better You make me wanna spend every moment together I won’t ever give you up I just wanna give you my love I can never have enough Of you…. Rain have fallen, tears have rolled, but I still love you We have touched, we have shared, every time you’re near I wanna hold you Every year I love you more and more you make me see I need you so much more I will give you all I can Even though you don’t understand but I am who I am cause of you…. When I look into your eyes I see everything your heart desire Every flame burning inside you All the love I gave you I won’t ever give you up I just wanna give you my love I can never have enough Of you…. I will give you all I can Even though you don’t understand but I am who I am cause of you…. |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
"I will give you all I can Even though you don’t understand but I am who I am cause of you" Such a sweet and well-written love poem. The thoughts are very tender and they come across really well. I enjoyed this a lot. Thanks for sharing.  "Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
This is so sweet! These are beautiful thoughts. Thanks for sharing them  Keep posting!Nice job! --Marie subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart. |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
Very sweet. I loved it, keep it up. *S*staci |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
*sigh* beautiful stuff here. Liked it lots. ~Carly There are pleasures in poetic pains that only poets know......~Unknown |
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Linc
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
Hey, Great job, this one is going into my library keep up the great work. Until your next poem-- Linc "Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment." |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This is so true. When you love somebody they completely change you....well not change....more like complete you. That in itself changes you for the better, at least it's supposed to. Anyhow, you explained this well.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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lonely*soul Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 396east haddam (moodus) ct :) |
wow thats a really cute love poem..im with dopey on this one!! *KiM* " im surrounded by people, but yet im still all alone" |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Great poem, I really enjoyed the read keep on posting. Andrew. " No Army can conquer a galaxy, yet faith alone can overturn the universe." |
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