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princess^sarah
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0 posted 2001-04-14 01:44 AM


If your ever feeling alone
and need comfort or care
i'll always be the one to stand by you
you know i'll always be there
the sun may not be shining
there may be clouds above
but for now until the time of time
i'll be sending you all my love.


When you just can't take the pain
and your thoughts have passed by
there will always be my shoulder for you
the moment you begin to cry
the birds may not be chirping
but we will never be apart
because i always want you close to me,
deep down inside my heart.

© Copyright 2001 sarah alford - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-04-14 01:47 AM


beautiful! WOW.. i really liked it.
lucky is that person to have a person like u.lol yea..great job on another poem..
                                


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princess^sarah
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2 posted 2001-04-14 01:59 AM



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3 posted 2001-04-14 03:03 AM


Sweeeeeeeeeeet poem. Awwwwwwwww
Thought you did just fine here.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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4 posted 2001-04-14 10:08 AM


  I'll ditto Javi's "Awwwwwwwww" on this one. Great job.  
  ~Carly

There are pleasures in poetic pains that only poets know......~Unknown

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5 posted 2001-04-14 10:35 AM


This is so sweet!  I hope you gave this to the person you wrote it about!
Nice job  

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

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6 posted 2001-04-15 08:09 PM


This was a very sweet poem, also very supportive!!!!
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7 posted 2001-04-15 08:15 PM


this is the kinda poem that could be given to an awsome friend or a specail person to ya..good job, whoever u wrote this for, should feel great !!!
        

" im surrounded by people, but yet im still all alone"

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8 posted 2001-04-19 06:10 PM


you and jbaker are obviously the romantics of the forum  

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee."  W.S.

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9 posted 2001-04-19 06:21 PM


She and Albert are obviously the lovebirds of the forum.  
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10 posted 2001-04-19 06:29 PM


Omg, this is so sweet. I absolutely love it!
Supportive and sweet, what a combination! Great job here.

Every action of our lives touches some chord that will vibrate in eternity.

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11 posted 2001-04-19 07:46 PM


allan..?
you trippen man. we're jus close friends!! lol
and i believe this poem was for hmmm.....     
but y u keep acting like that........

...?

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12 posted 2001-04-19 07:54 PM


I'm just teasing you man.  Give it a rest.     Everyone knows there's nothing serious between you two.  
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13 posted 2001-04-19 07:57 PM


exactly!!!!!!!!!!!!! "end of dialogue"  

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princess^sarah
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14 posted 2001-04-20 07:34 PM


isnt there....  .. :O  ...

LOL j.k

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