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starryeyed999
Junior Member

since 2001-03-05

Posts 35

0 posted 2001-04-14 01:40 AM

*Invisible*

The biggest amount of sun rays
could never light up my day.
I wish I could tell anyone who will listen how i feel.
The truth is, I can't stand to be left in the dust.
Who would like to be forgotten with time?
Maybe its my imagination,
or is it the truth,
did I suddenly disappear into the air?
What should I do,
how can I get you to notice me again?

<*Lacy*>
"I can only please one person a day. Today is not your day. Tomorrow doesn't look good either. I'll get back to you."

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

1 posted 2001-04-14 01:44 AM

i think these poem that u posted at the same day was written for one person am i right? anyways hope things work out 4 u and her/he...nice job on this though keep
writin

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2001-04-14 02:37 AM

I can see what you're trying to say here. I felt this poem. I been there.
I liked it.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

3 posted 2001-04-14 10:46 AM

I think many people have been in that situation. It's not fun...
Nicely done. I really liked this one.

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

4 posted 2001-04-14 07:11 PM

Your style is interesting, short, free-style. And very emotional. Something that I could not achieve very easily, my admiration goes to you.

~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.
~Unknown

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

5 posted 2001-04-14 07:24 PM

You can always email me if you need someone to talk to. I've been bothered by your poems lately for all I see is sadness. Hope things get better

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

Child of the Stars

Senior Member

since 2000-09-07

Posts 1658
Ann Arbor, MI

6 posted 2001-04-14 09:19 PM

Wake up early, go outside, stand in the heat of the sunrise. It melts away the feeling of invisible. Just try that, kay? Pretty pwease?

~Carly

There are pleasures in poetic pains that only poets know......~Unknown

lonely*soul
Member

since 2001-04-05

Posts 396
east haddam (moodus) ct :)

7 posted 2001-04-15 09:14 PM

been there..done that...it got better for me..well kinda, im sure itll get better for you too!!
KIM

" im surrounded by people, but yet im still all alone"

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