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starryeyed999
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since 2001-03-05
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0 posted 2001-04-14 01:39 AM


I'm wishing of you,
are you thinking of me?
want you here by my side,
but you're not so I'll cry.

Maybe one day,
I'll understand why we had to break it off.
You could've just told me straight from the start.

I don't know how
this all got so weird.
We thought we were meant to be.
i guess people just have to grow apart.

<*Lacy*>
"I can only please one person a day. Today is not your day. Tomorrow doesn't look good either. I'll get back to you."

© Copyright 2001 starryeyed999 - All Rights Reserved
anonymous albert ?
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1 posted 2001-04-14 02:05 AM


yep i liked this one also..keep writin
Dopey Dope
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2 posted 2001-04-14 03:06 AM


I didn't like this one much. You can do better.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

LoveBug
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3 posted 2001-04-14 08:53 AM


It is against the guidelines to post more than three threads in one day. Thank you.

"Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli

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