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Spine Grinder
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since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2001-04-12 07:37 PM

What's Your Point?
What's your point?
You don't need to yell,
I'm standing here,
Feeling like I'm only two feet tall,
Listening to you scolding me for?..

For being a kid?......

Jenn Cirrincione

Member Elite

since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

1 posted 2001-04-12 07:44 PM

Short. But it has a good point. Sometimes people should just relax, you know. We get the picture... quit drilling it in so much.

Jenn

"I'm a big, big, girl, in a big, big world, it's not a big, big thing if you leave me, but I do feel, that I will miss you much..." Emilia

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2001-04-12 07:46 PM

Wow......well it all depends upon the situation. Sometimes kids do rotten things.
I don't know what happened, but I liked the poem.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Attack Ferrit
Junior Member

since 2001-04-09

Posts 41
texas

3 posted 2001-04-12 08:20 PM

short n' sweet. i liked it, it has a really good point.

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

4 posted 2001-04-12 11:06 PM

Yeah, I like this a lot! Good job on the poem

"Be kind for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle" Plato.
Ever tried the Teen Explorer Forum?

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

5 posted 2001-04-13 10:49 AM

Good.... we've all felt this way at least once. It's not fun.
~Allan

Concieted?? Impossible! That would be a fault!

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

6 posted 2001-04-13 10:52 AM

This is a powerful poem in its simplicity. Very nice job.

--Marie

banburycross
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since 2001-03-27

Posts 946
viginia

7 posted 2001-04-13 11:45 AM

Being a kid is the best... i really liked this, it was good in its simplicity.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

Heavens Tears

Senior Member

since 2001-03-15

Posts 677

8 posted 2001-04-13 03:02 PM

Nice job. NOt your best, in my opinion, but still good. I agree with everyone else in that you make a good point.

*If the only place I can live my dreams is in my sleep, then I'll sleep forever!*

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

9 posted 2001-04-17 09:45 PM

This is really a short poem but it brings out a good question. So many things are going thru my mind now, but let me ask one question before I say anything. Do you listen to what he says?

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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