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Spine Grinder
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0 posted 2001-04-12 07:33 PM



Why do you need?.....

When the music is there to comfort you,
Why do you need others?
When the memories of your past cloud your vision,
Why do you need the present?
When life's troubles are finally on your last nerve,
Why do you need patience?

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Dopey Dope
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1 posted 2001-04-12 07:43 PM


To balance things out, I guess.
Nicely done. Provoked a lot of good thoughts.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

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I admire it daily

Lakewalker
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2 posted 2001-04-12 11:09 PM


Because someone told me I needed it!  Yup, thoughts definitley going here like Dopey said.  nice job

"Be kind for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle" Plato.  
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katherine
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3 posted 2001-04-13 03:54 AM


i think this one it makes you think.
it's great!
~kate

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4 posted 2001-04-13 07:54 AM


Hey,

     Yeah it makes you think. I liked it, hope to see more great work. Until your next poem

         -- Linc

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5 posted 2001-04-13 10:13 AM


This is a very thought-provoking piece, Spine.  Nice job on this... It really made me sit back for a few minutes after reading it.  I liked this a lot.

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

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6 posted 2001-04-17 09:40 PM


hmmmm.....
this piece is really diferent from the others I've read today
It's still making me think
I'll get back to you on this one  

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee."  W.S.

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