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Marshalzu
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0 posted 2001-04-12 04:53 PM


Nationalist.

One nation,
One people,
One spirit,
Flag,
Race,
Monarchy,
Proud sense of tradition,
A reason for anarchy,
Nationalist fervour,
A rebellious and over active youth,
Radicalism,
Nationalism doesn’t exist,
Rascism,
Anarchy cannot rule,
Fascism,
An apathy.

Andrew.

" No Army can conquer a galaxy, yet faith alone can overturn the universe."

© Copyright 2001 Andrew Sewell - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-04-12 06:16 PM


Ok, this one was a refreshing breath of air from your usual format, as I pointed out in another thread of yours.    I like the theme to it, the format you used suited it very well... great job, keep impressing me, Zu.  
~Allan

Concieted??  Impossible!  That would be a fault!

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2 posted 2001-04-12 07:26 PM


Really great job here. I loved the topic and message. Wonderful job!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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3 posted 2001-04-13 11:18 AM


This is a really good message!  Thanks for sharing.. Nicely done.

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

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viginia
4 posted 2001-04-13 12:33 PM


i really like the format of this poem.  the best way for a writer to grow and use their talents to the fullest extent is to use different formats and styles in their writing.  i'm glad to see you using a variety of techniques, keep posting your work.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

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5 posted 2001-04-13 04:19 PM


  Ohh, very nice here. Me liked. Me also liked the new format.  
  ~Carly

There are pleasures in poetic pains that only poets know......~Unknown

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6 posted 2001-04-18 04:31 PM


I have nothing else to do but agree  

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee."  W.S.

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